Reviews for Conceal, Don't Feel
Gotham317 chapter 15 . 1/23
I enjoyed reading your story, and I look forward to the climax.

However, what I really want to see is when Elphaba proves her innocence, she and her friends expose the Wizard as a fraud but also her biological father and how her mother's death and Nessa's condition was never her fault. Those milk flowers her mother was forced to eat was what killed her and crippled Nessa.
Vanessa Masters chapter 4 . 1/1
Glinda was looking at Anna. "Well, at least your guy actually knows you're getting married," she muttered. "Mine didn't, and look how well that turned out. I hate to break it to you, Anna, but to marry while you've known one another for just one day? I don't think that's going to end well."

"Thank you!" Kristoff exclaimed.

Anna shook her head. "Glinda, you don't understand," she said. "It's true love, I know it is!"

"That's what I thought," Glinda said sarcastically, "before I realised that he was really head-over-heels in love with my best friend."

Anna gaped at her.

"Believe me, Anna. One day is too short." Glinda shook her head. "You only know certain things about a man once you've spent a longer time with him," she said. "Like… It took me a week to discover that Fiyero likes to pick his nose."

Anna threw a look at Kristoff, who was rolling over with laughter. "I told you," he grinned. "Every man does it." He looked up at Glinda. "Does he eat it, too?"

"Ew!" Glinda shrieked, at which Kristoff only laughed harder.

Anna huffed and crossed her arms, staring daggers at Kristoff. "And I told you," she said irritably, "that Hans is a prince. Princes don't pick their noses."

"Actually," Glinda chimed in, "Fiyero is a prince as well. The Crown Prince of the Vinkus, to be exact."

Kristoff was laughing so hard by now that he was almost choking on it, while Anna just continued to glare at him.

"Tell me about Hans," Glinda said, oblivious to everything around her but the red-haired girl and always eager to hear a good love story. "What is he like?"

"Oh, he's so kind," Anna said, smiling when she thought of him. "He's a real gentleman. He has twelve brothers, you know – twelve! – and like I said, he's from the Southern Isles… His favourite food is sandwiches, and…" She faltered.

"And you don't know anything else about him," Kristoff finished for her.

She ignored him. "And he's wonderful," she finished, daring Kristoff to counter that statement.

Glinda smiled at her. "He sounds great," she said. "Fiyero only has one brother, also older than him, but they always got along really well."

Kristoff frowned. "If he's got an older brother, then how can he be Crown Prince?" he asked.

Glinda grimaced slightly. "Jermain is… I've met him once," she said. "He was supposed to be King one day, and he was engaged to a girl… I don't know what happened, exactly – Jermain didn't like to talk about it and neither did Fiyero, because he felt like it wasn't his place to tell – but at some point there was an accident. Jermain's fiancée died. Apparently it was really horrible, and Jermain has never been quite the same again. He discarded his birth right of becoming the King and left the Vinkus. He's been travelling all over Oz ever since, trying to find himself. Fiyero was very worried about him."

Anna and Kristoff were both silent, and even Olaf felt that the atmosphere had grown serious now and kept his mouth shut. "That's so sad," Anna whispered eventually.

Glinda smiled sadly. "I know. But he'll find another girl to love again," she said. "It's been three years now, I believe... he still doesn't want to be King – Fiyero will be – but I do believe he's finally getting better."

"That's good," said Anna. "I can't even imagine what it must be like to lose your fiancé like that."

Kristoff already opened his mouth, but Anna elbowed him harshly in the stomach. "I know you were going to make some kind of remark about me and Hans only having known one another for a day," she hissed at him when he whined. "Don't."

"Wasn't going to."

She raised an eyebrow and he caved. "Okay, I was."

Glinda was beaming at them. "You know, you two would be cute together," she said.

Anna and Kristoff immediately started spluttering.

"What?" Kristoff laughed nervously. "No, no…"

"I'm engaged," Anna protested weakly. "I couldn't…"

Glinda held up both hands. "Okay." She was grinning, though. She saw a perfect opportunity to play matchmaker here.

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Lol oh Glinda.

Oh no, Elsa abd Elpha!
Vanessa Masters chapter 3 . 1/1
Oh boy Ephaba saves Anna, but now is chased away by the gale force, not before Glinda warns Elphaba they’re coming.
Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 12/26/2019
Ooooh the sister connection is where things differ, Anna won’t let Elsa shut her out and things aren’t men able with Nessa, but she won’t let Elsa lose her chance to make amends
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
Oh that but between Glinda and Fiyero, sad but very well done.

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Elphaba stared at the girl across from her.

She had been flying over the mountains when she had suddenly realised that everything beneath her was white. When she had landed, she had discovered that the entire area was bathed in a thick layer of snow and ice… and then she had discovered the shining palace in the distance. She had climbed back onto her broom and flown in that direction, curious, and then she had seen a girl exiting the palace. The girl that was now standing a few metres away.

Elphaba dropped her broom and took a step closer.

Elsa came closer as well.

They studied one another for a few moments. Elsa's skin was pale, while Elphaba's was green. Elsa had platinum blonde, almost white, hair, and was dressed in a light, icy blue gown; while Elphaba's hair was a midnight black and she was wearing her trademark ebony dress. They took each other in for a few long moments, completely silent. It was almost like looking into a mirror that reflected the exact opposite of yourself – they were so different that in a way, they were alike.

Light blue eyes met dark brown ones. "Who are you?" Elsa asked, breaking the silence. "What are you doing here?"

Elphaba blinked, completely stunned that this girl didn't recognise her. She let out a small, nervous laugh. "Are you serious?" She gestured towards her green skin, her hat, then her broomstick. "Doesn't ring any bells?"

Elsa shook her head.

Elphaba gestured towards the palace now. "Is that yours?" she asked in wonder.

Elsa nodded a bit hesitantly. "Look," she said with a sigh. "You should get away from me."

Elphaba raised an eyebrow.

"Not that I wouldn't like to get to know you," Elsa quickly said. "It's nothing personal, trust me. It's just… I don't want to hurt you."

Elphaba took the other girl in for a few long moments. "Then don't," she said simply.

"I wish it were that easy!" Elsa made a frustrated hand gesture, and immediately, a few icicles suddenly appeared from the frozen ground and pointed in her direction. She quickly lowered her hands, folding them together. "Please leave," she whispered.

Elphaba, however, was amazed. "You have magical powers?" she whispered incredulously.

"It's why I left Arendelle," Elsa said, wrapping her arms around her own waist. "I was endangering everyone. I can't control it, which is exactly why you need to leave. Please… I don't want to hurt anyone."

Elphaba couldn't believe her own ears. Here was a girl her age with magical powers… and she couldn't control them. Elphaba hadn't thought she would ever meet anyone like herself, but this girl seemed to prove her wrong.

"I don't want to leave," the green girl said. "You're the first person to talk normally to me in over two years."

Elsa seemed astonished to hear that. "I…"

"You can't make me leave," Elphaba added. "I refuse to." She wanted to elicit a response from the other girl, try to get her to use her magic. She wanted more proof of what this white-haired girl could do before she would give herself away.

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Kinda surprised Elphaba isn’t steaming, all that show, it’s essentially water, unless she’s using magic to keep
It off.
Pip and CO chapter 2 . 11/29/2017
just begin it and I already love it ! me I see Willemijn as Elphaba and Elsa is for me Anais Delva who is the french ElsaI'm french I think it's because of that
Fiction is the Truth chapter 6 . 7/14/2017
I absolutely love this!
KatriaEnjolras chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
I just Love Love Love the concept of Elsa and Elphaba in a story. They are very much alike. And I adore Olaf and when he says "Yes, why?" I xan't help but laugh. He is adorable and cute and... Great story. I can't wait to read more. So that's what I'll do right now.
Imelda chapter 5 . 12/26/2015
I was reading the Wicked book the one that is by that Gregory Mau... person I can't remmenber his name. But when Elphaba comes in contact with water it burns her, so when she cries it burns her but she bears it. Just so you know
Dragonheart35 chapter 15 . 8/27/2015
*zips over to the sequel*

...
*zips back*
*hands cookie* Here. You did well. Oh, and I would be totally willing to join that 'Frex Hunters: Hans' thing you mentioned a chapter or so back.

*grabs broomstick and flies away again*
Fiyeraba's Love Child chapter 15 . 4/15/2015
YAY Gelphie friendship fluff! Glin is amazeballs! I'm so happy that I have found my real life Glinda already :D (although she hates pink :D :D ) Oh and I forgot to say that before: I felt the same of Elsa ending up without a man (or a woman, since there are rumors that Elsa could become the first gay Diyney character). Love the Fiyeraba fluff, love the Elmain fluff, love the Kristanna fluff :D I just really love fluff :D .. ok I should go to bed.. I'm very tired and I doubt that my brain works properly anymore... Goodnight :)
Fiyeraba's Love Child chapter 14 . 4/15/2015
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand the Wizard was just added to my list...
Gosh! I loved the troll wedding! (Another favorite moment from the movie, though there it was only an almost wedding). Love the fluff
Fiyeraba's Love Child chapter 13 . 4/15/2015
Gosh :D :D ... I hope I didn't wake up any other students here... (boarding school, thin walls, 2:09 am...) Glinda made me burst into laughter :D Also Anna punching Hans! That in particular is one of my favorite moments in the movie! Now that I've watched Frozen Fever I also think sending Hans back to the Southern Isles is the perfect solution for him :D :D ... oh and as always the Fiyeraba fluff is
Fiyeraba's Love Child chapter 12 . 4/15/2015
Nope. I'm choosing to relax. I'm not gonna say how much I hate Hans. He isn't worth my precious swear words.
Fiyeraba's Love Child chapter 11 . 4/15/2015
AAAAARRRRRRGGHHHHHHHH I HAVE QUITE THE REPERTOIRE OF THINGS I'D LIKE TO DO TO HANS! FRIGGIN ASSHOLE! ROT IN HELL! IN A FROZEN HELL! STUPID ARROGANT OBNOXIOUS SCUMBAG! F*CK YOU, YOU BASTARD YOU SON OF A BITCH! (Sorry I curse worse than Elphaba...or Idina for that matter and Hans really evokes the worst in me.) Olaf get yourself together and help Elphaba! And then go and find the others and kick some ass!
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