Found another awesome fanfic writer!

Ate up the three chapters instantly. Can't wait for the next one!

The relationships in this chapter was interesting, to say the least. I really liked the platonic side of the Elgang, something that I rarely see in other fanfics. You also had my favorite LKxEM shipping, so thank you for that.

Overall, awesome story (Stories? Vignette? Snippets?). Kudos on your writing!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU ADD X EVE

PLEASE MAKE FOR ADD OMG PLS ADD EVE

Very nice story! I love it :D

Your story is good and the writing great but I will stop reading it because I can't stand RavexRena. Sorry but it is just a personnal choice your story is still very well written _

Now I understand why it fits so much in my point of view. Your interpretations up there about the characters are really similar to mine, or it's the other way around, I don't really care.
Firstly, let's say that specifically speaking, a couple of mistakes in grammar can be spotted in the chapter, but they are not a big deal at all and the update is still undeniably great in general.
Secondly, Eve speaks in third-person often in Japanese Elsword and its complements? To be honest, I'd treat it as a new thing, but again, it really make things understandable. The Eves regardless of job paths will tend to speak in a monotone style and matter-of-fact. And I'd say, speaking in third-person usually really helps portraying these ones rather than in first person. An there's the portraying of Chung, he really sounds mature and off of a leader, nice.
Thirdly, yeah all the job paths you pick for them except Chung (LK, EM, GA, BM, CBS, SD) really bring out the most optimistic features that they can get, but again I'd say balance them out since, yeah, each class has merits to be appreciated but also flaws to be picked at.
Agreed with your explanations up there so, yeah nothing more to say except that I'll look forward to the next update with anticipation and patience. Good luck!

Chung is so cool in this. Update soon.

OmG ! You finally updated :D
So this is EvexChungxAra right? I love the three of them so it's no biggie for me XD as long there is ElsAi it's a no problem XD
Eve smile OwO I wanna see!

Question? YES
WHERE DID YOU GET THE COVER PICTURE OF THIS STORY? OWO
It's nice, and I want to know where you get it or.. DID YOU MAKE IT BY YOURSELF?! OWO

Waa It's so nice to read a happy fic again. It's so...refreshing, after reading and writing so many 'dark and edgy' fics in the past few months. I really like this one—update soon!

merry xmas and happy new year to you too! i hope you can update soon and im loving the story plot and pairings!

Your way of expressing the on-going relationship between the characters in this series of snippets is really commendable. Trust me, I'd really like to show my understandings from the very first chapter but I feel that it won't be solid without any inference to the prior chapter, so I'll do that in this review for chapter 2.
First of, your writing in my opinion is quite qualified while keeping its simple-to-understand feature, and by all means I'd appreciate that very much. There are specific vocabularies which are used for the purpose of description, but none of them were too unnecessarily complicated or specialized that I have to look up in a respective dictionary or anything like that, which to my view is another plus; also, no grammar errors.
Now, the content. Honestly, while keeping my respect to all of the other authors around in this archive, I could rarely find any story in which the characters was so-like them and reasonable like in this story. By all means, I couldn't comprehend the characters any better than this. Elsword as LK and Aisha as EM are both considered to be the most mature figure out of their three paths of profession, yet a little childish, followed by argues and bickers, yet I'd imagine their relationship to be smoothest out of the Elsword x Aisha pairings (by classes) but this is to be more natural and reasonable. After all, nothing can go smooth all the time. You did a good job portraying Rena and Raven's obliviousness to each other at first just because of the past and their own internal thoughts and struggles, also due to Raven's reservation and refer back to Elsword's reservation in the field of emotion that they can't easily express their true feelings to the girls (Rena, Aisha) which slow down the progress, just to be anticipated. I agree with you, Raven x Rena relationship tends to be slower, but sweeter while keeping their maturity.
This newest update again made my day for today. I'll look forward to the next one!

great job portraying Raven and Rena's relationship
awesome!

This is perhaps the best portrayal of Rena and Raven's relationship I have seen. I agree with you one hundred percent on their relationship. It is a bond that is slow to develop, mostly because of the baggage that they carry. Raven has his past with Seris and Rena has been living for an incredibly long time and has likely seen things that the rest of the gang cannot comprehend. Raven finds solace in Rena because of her similarities to his late fiancé, but it is prevented from getting closer because he needs to let go, something that is very difficult to do. And Rena finds comfort around Raven because despite the difference in their ages, Raven has seen and suffered much, yet he pulls through by sheer will and takes action to rectify his mistakes. Rena comes off as someone who leaves a problem to fester and eventually fade, and Raven's efforts to repent for the sins he committed are, what I think, the thing that Rena wants, to be able have the inner strength to face a problem rather than run from it. You have my heartfelt thanks for such a great chapter.
Oh, and here is what I think of the ElGang as a family: Rena and Raven are the parents, Elsword and Aisha are the bickering siblings, Eve is the socially awkward adopted child, Chung is the cousin who came to visit, Ara is a foreign exchange student, Elesis is the eldest sibling coming home from college, and Add... Is the insane escape convict! XD

This story stays true to the characters' point of view, all of them, from the possibility on their job path chosen to their behaviors. I couldn't find any better way to interpret their actions and reactions than this, especially on their internal emotions; yeah, as a LK, Elsword "might" have changed into a "complete" different person than he used to be, but to his dismay he will not always act like a gentleman. Aisha, too, as an EM, she stays calm and sweet most of the time, but there are occasions like this when the both of them unintentionally act out of character, you have totally nailed these.
A few word duplications as well as minor flaws (for example in Aisha's response :"W-well you could be a little more gentleman and excuse your way out of that", maybe "you could be a little more of a gentleman" is clearer) could be spotted in places throughout the chapter, but this is perfectly normal, happens to everyone. Otherwise, this is well-written, the vocabulary pool is great. I don't even know if I can write a story this good. These small mistakes can be spotted clearly only when we're the readers, after all.
This story made my day. Keep it up!

Oh man that was...REALLY GOOD STORIES! XD
Really romantic, and yeah you can bring their real personality very well, great! :D
and also, LK x EM, oh yeah! XD