he is so cute with ben

Hehehe I love broken cute moments :3 good work :3 keep writing broken fanfiction :3

fanttastic

IT was perfect there was only one flaw. It's Skinnier with and -I- not skinner. Other than that it was perfect well written a few other grammatical errors, but those mostly made it sound like it was all in Rook's head so my recommendation is not to change your style but just stay in Rooks pov as much as possible. Anyway well written, smart, funny and cute. It was really good and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

Cute.

cute

It was cute. The only thing that kinda urked me a little was the fact that Rook was using contractions, which he doesn't do since they're considered cuss words on his planet. Other than that, I liked it.

Awww cute XD X3