awwwww I loved this so much it made me really happy inside

OMG I ship them so much! This is incredible! Do more!

I loved it! it, it was brilliant i love it so much when is the next one comming!

Awwww, it's sooo cuteee!

Love your story eight and seven are the best keep writing your a great writer

CAN U PLZ WRITE MORE. PLZ

Charlette don't be so hard on yourself! I love ur stories plz plz plz make more!

What? It's been over a year? Please update, I just want to read Nine and Six's date, please...

Please update! Amazing chapter!

Eight should die and then nine comforts marina yah know nine/marina one shot would be awesome and an ella and nine one shot and I like when eight is jealous of five so more of that

Aww! I love jealous Eight he's so adorable! This is such a great idea (I laughed so hard when Five got knocked out) and really cleverly all linked together!

Ooh I love when eight is jealous of five it's so funny

I love both of the chapters! So cute :) although it did seem like it was missing a little bit, cause it seemed like it kind of skipped around and was missing some parts, but I still love it :) I love Navrina as much as you seem to! Beautiful writing by the way :)

SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE A COUPLE MORE CHAPTERs :D

I love love triangles I think five should make a move on her and eight get real jealous man I would love to see that like full blow over jealous that you just can't help the OH MY GOD DID HE JUST DO THAT! Type of jealous