Oh this is great I think I might want to see what happened between Glynda and Cinder first before other things because thats what I'm mostly interested and stuff...so yeah I want to see the conflict and stuff and I'm also intrigued with Roman and I'd hope you show something about it but anyways I like the story I can't wait enough for what happens next :-D

Ooh this might be interesting if you finish this story now wouldn't it? Yeah it'll be great I just know it will :-D

I'd personally like to see the falling out next, personally.

On a separate note, I'm curious; Ray Rose, did he assume his wife's name, because if memory serves Qrow and Red were Summer and Ozpin's children.

I am glad this is continuing.
Slenderman!

Nice but the team names are made up of first letter of each persons name

Thank you very much for that.

I do apologize for not getting to this sooner... It's been in my favorites, but for some reason I hadn't had it in my follows... my mistake.

I've got to say that I can't help getting mior Yuki Nagato vibes from Goodwitch at 12 years old...
If There's any criticism I can offer on this chapter, it's that the children - most of them anyway - sound perhaps a bit too mature. I get that it more or less fits for Bruce and Gylnda by personality, but dialing back the vocabulary just a bit might be something to consider.

Other than that though, I did very much enjoy the chapter, and again, sorry that I didn't get to this sooner.

Interesting, but I can't shake the impression of a sentient gorrilla when you mention "Grod..." It could just be me though.

Seperately, I do like that bit abot the lucky fang, that was rather clever.

Also, have you ever read "Atlas Shrugged?"? I find something about your writting style pleasantly remaniscent of Ayan Rand, regardless of your pilosophy.

Finally, I'd love to see more of Goodwitch at some point, but either way, great work, and I look forward to more.

Has Fu dressed as batman for Halloween?

An excellent job with the juxtaposition during the countdown by the way, but what I don't understand is Fu's decision to leave.

I'm glad you brought Fu back; I liked what little we saw of her previously, and I'm happy to see that she was not just a throw-away character.

ok, if some guy runs up to me saying the worlds going to end in 11 days time im not going to believe him unless he has a lot more evidence then just that. :)
either way great chapter and i egarly awaite the next one, good luck and till then, bye! :)

P.S. i wouldnt min reading of winter and Gilgamesh.

well that was a twist, i wouldnt have expected port to be the formor leader of the white fang.
great story so far, im loving it, cant wait to read more! :)

ok, first off i like the story so far, its really interesting and i cant wait to see where it goes, (surprised, i havnt read many fics where summer was rubys grandma, mostly just mother so i wasnt quite expecting her to be rubys grabdmaother here)
so what does the P stand for in the BP and AP in the time line, ehh i guess ill find out sometime soon ish, (i do still have like 6-7 chapters left just to get caught up)
ok i know this is a fanfic so i dont really care that much but i still feel i have to rant slightly about this, :) there is no way Ozpin is over 50 in RWBY but by your time line hes atleast like in his 70's by the time Ruby and Ozpin meet in episode 1 of the show, so either people age slower in your RWBY universe, or Ozpins just old in your story. (again i know its fanfiction, i dont really care and will continue to read anyways).
Anyways again great story and im off to the next chapter, (in the morning) :)

This story is actually pretty fascinating; I can't wait to see more