write more chapters

love it

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE add another chapter! Me love tis story!

I missed you, so I read this story, and now I can truly say I regret not reading this sooner. I know how hard you worked on this and I'm so proud at you for finishing it, and so beautifully too!

Every moment was endearing, you have this endless capacity to create the most bitter sweet moments. These two were written really well! It's kind of indescribable, the emotions that were thrown around, but I sunk into the moment like Zero's fangs into Takuma! XD that bite was just beautiful. The kiss surprised me, but i'm kind glad you didn't include the smexy times in a way, maybe that would've been a story or another fic for a second meeting.

Djaudifjresidjfgmdkf it had just the right amount of everythingx.x you're too awesome. Please share your awesomeness with me?
That eloquent writing style *glares at it with a mixture of passion and envy*

Write more awesomeness for all your fans soon! I thinkit'd be rather interesting if you wrote more of these two

P.s. Fkesifjgridfjr yes, zero suffering *A* Takuma in the same state too... It was almost too good to be true xD i love my depressing stuff too mych haha. You write it too good xD

Hope to hear from you soon dear :)

It's like 5am so sorry for ramblingskdferiosdjfrjk xD

*It's a good thing, a good thing. That's what I meant, not a hood thing. Haha, but maybe it is. I was thinking of some dark, shabby alley, after all. And I am kind of ghetto, lol. Haha, sorry

Actually, I really like the idea of Takuma and Zero. It's refreshing. As much as I love Kaname and Zero, I like basically any character paired with Zero. But alas, no one ever bothers to write different(crack) pairings.

Back to your story, ahem. I read this the first day you posted it and have only read it another time since then, so the details of it are fuzzy. But I wanted to review because it made an impression on me. For some reason, it made me feel like I was in some alley and watching everything happen from there. It reminded me of the book, The House of the Spirits, and Ursula, when she leaves the family. Haha, I don't know, it's a hood thing, though. Anyway, Takuma is lovely in this, as odd as it may sound. You broke him down and exposed him. And of course, Zero... Always the snarky one. There was also a pleasant feeling of confusion in this, whether it was from my part, I don't know but... For some reason I liked how this made me feel. Like when I was nearing the end, I felt horribly pessimistic. But that kiss! In the end, it was a mixture of some strange pessimistic hopefulness. You absolutely devastated me with this story.

Sorry for all the rambling and grammar errors :/

I just realized you put this story up- and even though you already know my opinion on it I felt the need to say that this story, along with all of your other ones, is amazing. Great work as usual, ya never disappoint.

keep going,interesting

Finally! Someone who posted a full story on TakuZero! XD
The plot was amazing! Something about this Takuma is sad though... I also wished it was going to be a lemon!
I hope you post more in the future! :)

I like a more mature takuma, there is actually a spanish fic called Broken wings where a older takuma is in love with zero and ends up having a half bond with him but Kaname has already forced a full bond on Zero anyway thanks for the fic.