Sorry didn't realise it said complete... But anyway I still love this fic

I love this story... I cannot wait for more so please update soon

Deep. This chapter really meant something. It made me stop and think about some serious things. And I'm glad you're taking the 'Ed x Mustang' thing farther. I really don't know what else there is to say... Other than job well done.
-Rima Mashika.

So, you showed more effort into the pairing this time. I really lied the picture hanging on the wall. That was a smart move. It showed the reader that Mustang cared for Ed. That's a good thing to show considering that they will be together soon (I hope). Good job on this chapter.
-Rima Mashika.

Alright. It wasn't bad. I really liked how you added the comedy into the story. But, I was hoping for more connection with Ed and Mustang. When I read the 'shower' part, I thought for sure that you would take advantage of that to carry out the relationship between the two. Though you didn't, I still felt like this was a good chapter.
-Rima Mashika.

I'm very glad you have decided to do the yaoi pairing. I really do love your story. I can relate a lot to Ed. And, no. I'm not saying I cut myself. I'm simply saying that I feel alone as well. You're doing a very great job. I must say, though, I was surprised to here you had a girlfriend. Does that mean that you're a boy? How odd. I imagined you as a girl, for some reason... Either way, you're a wonderful writer. I hope you continue writing.
-Rima Mashika.

Again, I say that this story is relatable. I can't really express how I fell about this piece. All I know is that it seems like it going to end either in love or in death. And I'm hoping that you went along with the pairing. I like yaoi, and Ed and Mustang are one of my favorite couples. So, all and all, you did a nice job once again. And I think that this chapter is even better than the first. Nicely done.
-Rima Mashika.

This is a good piece. It's highly relatable to someone with problems like that. Please, know that you've done a good job on this piece. The number one thing I look for is if I can relate, and I'm sure that others agree. This isn't the best piece I've seen, but it is far from the worst. Job well done. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
-Rima Mashika.

Okay I have to read more of this;)

wow i love this fic! please keep it up it amazing made me cry to a little...

You are awesome. I love your writing. Poor Roy and Ed

Hawkeye. Whatever goes on in your head. We will probably never know but this story is really good

Yay! its really good.

It's good.

I want yaoi but so far I like it.