A lot of potential here-I hope you come back and finish it. Something tells me I will need to get my hands on a copy of Mawdryn Undead...

I really hope you update this someday, I absolutely adore it!

Oh, God, please finish this.

Dad!Five is just the best.

Yeah I can see Tegan smacking The Doctor with his own celery. lol

It looks like you've probably given up on this one, but it's so funny.

Ha! Very funny idea, I also like how Tegan and Nyssa try to sound grown up with nobody taking them as such. The part where Turlough is documented as the Doctor's partner is also fun.

XD that is just hilarious, but i am really curious as to what they are up to, hmmm... this is absolutly adorable X3, i have a feeling that this wont work out very well, for anyone.. anyways keep up the adorable wrighting and allons-y! X3

This is an interesting story and it was creative to use the events of Mawdryn Undead, with Tegan and Nyssa getting younger. I also liked the line about the Doctor being the only to use the crayons. :)

Uh oh. This sounds like it's going to be hilarious and suspenseful! Please write more!

I like this set up! Got you bookmarked; I'm looking forward to chapter two.

Turlough has just the right degree of snark. Everyone is in character, but Vis especially. Nice job.

Oh this sounds promising, any plans to continue?