Nice: Story is compact and creative. When you can get my arm hairs to stand, its good, to me.

Oh! You finished it!

Nice work! Glad everyone's relatively okay. The fight scenes rocked. I felt bad for Ren after Nora's getting-eaten stunt- if he doesn't have amnesia after this I hope he and Nora get a chance to have a nice long talk about what happened.

Anyway, congrats on completing a great read!
- Fiercesomest

What a fantastic story! Spellbinding plot, wonderful grasp of the characters and relationships amongst them, and a tantalizing ending scene. It was perfect! Or in the lingo, “That was awesome!”

Yeah happy you're continuing this

Oh my word. They're taking Nora.

... I have a feeling this will be bad, but also really, really good.

Hope you continue soon!

- Fiercesomest

This. Was awesome. The action, the dialogue, the freaking soul-sucking giant Grimm thing.

Not sure if you meant to do it or not, but calling Ren and Nora "one" of the top fighters in the school was hilarious. And so true! You can't have one without the other. XDXD

Poor sad Ren at the end. (The line about his sadness being a sticky cocoon- /nice/. Really nice. I could feel that one.)

And there's another chapter?! Well, time to check that out.

- Fiercesomest

So sweet, this left me in tears!

THE FEELS! AAAAAAAHHHH! I was tearing up in the end! I was so relieved when I read the word boop.

*Sob*
That was beautiful...

*ugly crying* this is so beautiful and thrilling and sweet and sad and and *more crying* the last part really made me sob the most. The light in the end of the thunnel. Gorgeous work! thanks for the read!

I came here to laugh... not to feel!

but apart from that... excellent work, a well written and very emotive fic. -CC

This refused me to tears. Bravo.

WOW! I would say "wow, what a great story!" But there is too much feels for me... YOU ALMOST DID HER IN! WHAT KIND OF PERSON ARE YOU?! A really good writer, that's what. I LOVED the 'boop'...finished the story with images of Nora slamming down a huge bottle of syrup and Yang losing some money. Thanks for this. :)

This was an overall good story that fight scene was done really well and I loved seeing Ren kick that soulsucking monsters ass and save Nora. Its really sad but also realistic, I like that. That ending though , it was really well done you really captures that sense of complete despair that ten felt at that moment and then your portrayal of his relief was great. Good job.

That story was AWESOME I loved it so much and I'm so glad that Nora's ok. I kinda wanna read like an epilogue or something. Either way Awesmazing story and keep up the awesome work!