these chapters are very good ya should put more chapters on here

This is really good

Um... Instead of writing this HUMUNGO authors note you could have done another chapter. And left pit "Whatcha think whatcha think?!" After each chapter.

You know this is just as funny as anything on ff i eber read. Any way go to truelifedotorg and update when ya get the chance

Did...did you type out an emote of a penis ejaculating? Seriously? :/

Please don't brag and say that it's a must read.
It's not.
I don't mean to be rude, but the idea has been taken many times before (it's not yet a cliché genre, lucky for you, so if you can make it a little more original and unique, do so!), plus the grammar needs some work. And spelling. (A LOT of work.) Maybe you could try getting a beta; daphrose would be a good choice.

check out my story if u have time its Brase also thxs:) love ur story

Make the next chapter say stuff like she's going to live and she wakes up but then... Dun dun dun... Spike attacks her again and hurts her in a different way. I know dramatic. But then she might live hopefully.

Continue plz ... Here's a dollar [($)]

I'm crying u know I become emotional very fast

Omg this is amazing! I NEED MORE:) but seriously u rock... Thats all i can say plz update soon!

Make more

PLease continue! If you have the chapter written just post! please!

KEEP BREE ALIVE!

I'm not a huge fan of Brase, but I like reading Brase stories themselves, so... well, this story's plot is relatively good. Please write with correct punctuation and grammar; it annoys me to try and follow the story.