Hmmm, being a little harsh with Carmelita here and the fake cleavage comment, aren't we?

I enjoyed whole story nice work.

Great story, definitely my second-favorite Sly fic. I look forward to reading the sequel. It's also crazy how little attention this fic has gotten seeing its length and quality. Keep it up!

-Magnor

Please tell me you're gonna write a sequel soon! This is my absolute favorite Sly story. And what's with all the sexual tension and no action, huh? I wanted to see Sly and Maya's relationship progress a little further (emotionally...and maybe a little physically). I hope you start on the next installment soon. I'm so excited, I can't wait! :D

This story is amazing and the grammar is like a work of art. The relationship between mirage and sly was a little underdeveloped butt fit wellwith the story. However I believe that you may have left this story on an unintended cliffhanger. This I believe would work well for sly Cooper 3's Stryker line but the choice is yours all the same keep up with the good work:-D

I'm hoping for sequels

Well it's cute that they are kind of together but I had hoped more heated arguments and heated emotions where Mirage tries to kill or capture Sly but fails when Sly does something incredible.

The long waited kiss or whatever. Sky beat Mirage again. Way to go Sly! And Mirage for trying out anyway and not giving up.

When I played Sly Coopper 2 for the first time I thought Neyla was much coolet than Carmelita who have this annoying obsession of Sly. How bad that she was the bad guy and got destroyed in the end. Again interactions between Sly and Mirage are entertaining. Sly just likes to mess with Mirage :D

I love this! The argument between Mirage and Sly is fantastic. And I'm glad that Mirage isn't a Mary Sue who can beat Sly with one hand. Mirage sounds really interesting character and I can't wait to read more. Oh, it cracked me up when Sly said "Dimitri's wife or something." Dimitri's wife! Muahhahahaha! :D

Please tell me that there'll be a sequel! For I and probably many others must know what happens next! This was an absolutely amazing story and I hope to see more later. All I have left to say is good luck and keep up the excellent work!

Sincerely,
DonTheHero

Awww, No sappy ending? Well great story.

Aww where did the Sly/Maya love go? Anyway, great story, can't wait for the next one!

Aww...good ending. I'll be expecting more from you

-Spartan10007

Man Bison seems to be taking a long time to take care of. Do you need to put so much detail into the parts taken straight from the game?