Reviews for Lola, Polaris
The White Leopard chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
You know, I think Vega is pretty underappreciated at times. I enjoyed looking through his eyes.

(And yeah, I'll be reading through your archives. lol)
Lea the Red chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
I
LOVE
THIS
So much! I had something similar in my mind and then found this and its so perfect ajsvshajansbsjwjdbajs
Nichalia chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Not a fan of character studies, but I liked reading this!
Apathetic Sympathy chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Really lovely fic! I absolutely adore this character study, you capture James and all of his reactions very well. People always view him as the sort of goofy character, especially so if they don't talk to him on the Normandy (personally I know quite a few people who just kind of skip over him. u.u), but even those who do like him often portray him as a character with little substance. Your short fic here really did his character justice though. I think the end here was my favourite part, simply due to the way James sees things as well as my inner fangirl squeeing about some Shakarian. x'D
karkashan chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Not sure why I love this more: That it's so overwhelmingly James I can almost smell it, or that it's a Shakarian (sorta) fic with Ash in it.
Random Frog chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
This story is excellent! Vega seems so spot-on and realistic. You should continue the story, or at least write more ME fiction. I love Shepard/Garrus stories :D
Catori1207 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Oh, that was just wonderful! Your characterization of Vega is spot-on. First official offering to the ME fandom, you say? I am definitely looking forward to more! :3
Kage chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Oooh. More Shep and Garrus please! Maybe a look at them through all the characters eyes? ...Okay thats a big ask :P
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
This was great!
augmentedfourth chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I know it's labeled as complete, but I'd really love to read more of this!
Shootingstar7123 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
This is great! Your Vega voice is dead-on.
Fiwen9430 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Great Vega POV story. It's nice to see some of the less appreciated characters getting some love.
servantofclio chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Fabulous Vega voice here! I had a hard time getting him. I always like seeing Shepard through unfamiliar eyes, and seeing this moment is especially nice.
Peres chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Short and sweet. I never liked Vega much - he just didn't register as a person instead of a steroid overdose - but I love the character and the POV you've given him here.

Shep Garrus forever!