PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

Your plot is great and I love how Mia and Loki have met. And their little convo stations they have been have on the train.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters.

Please update! He just met her and I really want to see what will happen next! XXXXXX

I really didn't want to review, because I didn't know what to write, but you said that every time we review, Loki smiles, and who am I to deny a demi-god (god of Mischief and Lies, at that) his smile? :D
Um...just update sooon...

Update soon, please.

I love your story! It is a great take on a more humble Loki (who is my fav - I have a thing for bad boys). Look forward to your next update!

NICE introduction of the OC!Love!Interest *thumbs up*

This chapter gave me warm smiles so it is a simple short and sweet chapter. Thank you

Yay! He met her! And, well... I think Loki is great, you are also great and your story is great as well!

This seems like an interesting story, but there is one thing I don't understand. If Odin knows that none of what Loki did was his fault, why does he still punish him? That sounds mighty unfair to me.

please mention the mortal soon!

I loved it! Tony actually gave him some useful advice inside the rules. I once went to New York (Not really, just the airport) but I saw it from the air and even when I just saw it for a second I agree with that, is amazing!
Continue with your story, I like it a lot!

I want more and I want it NOW!
Imagineer

Great story! :)

Looking forward to more :)

GREAT STORY IDEA! PLEASE, MORE MORE MORE!