| Reviews for Sleepy Time By Your Side |
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chibi-Clar chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 Cute |
SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Lovely. Although I'm generally not a fan of the whole 'dad doesn't want his little girl to date' trope because it feels incredibly paternalistic and super anti-feminist. Great writing! |
Kimmers chapter 1 . 2/7/2014 This is a great Fic Love the way you captured them Full. Would love to see another one after she had the baby which hopefully is a girl LOL |
Wannabewriter1010 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 Cute story. Well done. |
Starlight77 chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 hahaha, little salmon ladder, beating up Roy...this is too cute. |
clemsongirl26 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 LOVE! Seriously, Oliver as a daddy just makes my heart melt... And sexy Oliver makes my mouth water... Love how you write the witty banter between them...so in character! |
LightningPrincessR chapter 1 . 11/30/2013 A real delight to read! I loved the olicity cuteness. And I have to say I would love to see Oliver's expression if he finds out that he is having a daughter. He would truly be one of the most overprotective dads in the world by wanting to arrow any boy that comes near his daughter. I found it cute that Felicity talked about getting their son a salmon ladder. All I could picture was a mini-oliver running around and causing trouble. Keep up the great work. |
BeBrezzy chapter 1 . 11/29/2013 lol! so cute. |
Poetgirl925 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013 Okay, I have a serious case of the warm fuzzies now :). All 3 of your fics are so cute, and they highlight what I love about this ship - the fact that Felicity brings out a side of Oliver no one else does. The whole part about him talking more for each year he's been with her because her rambling is contagious - omg lol. Anyway really loved these - hope you're working on more! And if you ever want to have a fic discussion, look me up on Tumblr or Twitter - I go by the same username everywhere :) |
Meero94 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013 You should see the smile on my face right now; I honestly think my face is about to split open. I love this. Every word and every line of it. The amount of adorableness and the cute banter between them killed me. I love the feel of utter domesticity you gave them and how Oliver had not only gotten used to her rantings but also started participating in them. I also love the idea of the former playboy having to deal with a daughter and possible future dates for said daughter. The Oliver and GPS part made me laugh out loud, it's hard to imagine him frightened by a "talking" car without giggling. And don't get me started on Oliver's embarrassment over the mention of bras and periods for his daughter I just.. asdfghjkl; *takes a deep breath* This entire fic had put a huge smile on my face and I can honestly go on for hours about the cuteness of it all. The last part was not only hot but also very amusing. I can completely imagine Felicity lecturing Oliver at a time like that. I also loved the mention of Diggle teasing Oliver and of poor Tommy (that part made me sad). And maybe I'm a little bit (a lot) in love with your writing style. Loooove the work and I can't wait to read more from you :) Welcome aboard! |
cherry valence chapter 1 . 11/15/2013 Oh! When I opened this fic up, I was all...this is going to be cute squishy baby fic...and then I get to the part about Tommy and the basketball games (and I think that is one of the sweetest most, TOMMY things to do. I can just picture him taping these games and...wow. Not gonna cry ;'S And then the bit with the GPS, and Felicity teasing him to take his mind off of it. It is such a her thing to do. And the "Hey, I'm not that old!" line...LOL Like, I feel that Oliver if definitely older than Felicity...but they've never really specified...so I like that. And HA! Oliver would totally be the most protective dad in the world. That would be incredible to see him with a girl. After the way he greeted Roy when they met at Merlyn's building I can just picture him being all...my daughter? You? No. *shakes head* Back to your corners. Also loving the way that everyone is on the inside with this, I really want to see him and Felicity, and Roy, and Thea, and Diggle as just one big happy family...and of course, baby! I really hope you keep writing more of Arrow, it was incredible and such a delight. I was super excited to be trolling for some fic to read and coming across one of yours! Oh, and when he swoops her up to carry her off like that...that was hot. Pretty sure you just took me through the entire range of human emotion with this. And just...it amused me so much...Felicity! God, the lights and...tv. Such an incredible read, and just what I was looking for. |
snowbunny chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 Hi, great story you did awesome. |
lizook chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 So I just love the sense of family here. I mean beyond the obvious of her being pregnant, there's this warmth and closeness between them that speaks to how much they've let each other in. I think it's especially present in her reading everything he's not saying about Tommy and then knowing how to respond to that. Like I said, love the little girl teasing. I completely feel inferior on that note now. And the ramble at the end, her energy concerns, is just perfect! Really, nicely done - hope you have some more in store for us :) |
rowanshand chapter 1 . 11/13/2013 Oh my gee! You love these two, too! I could not even explain my excitement upon seeing this pop up in my messages. You are such an incredible writer and you write them so amazingly, Felicity with her rambling and pure cuteness only to be counteracted by Oliver's steely faces and rough edges. Her teasing of someday having a girl was great! I loved it all! BRAVO! |
Huwjwjw8282 chapter 1 . 11/12/2013 This was lovely and adorable and more. |