Reviews for Chill of Death
BlueShard20 chapter 5 . 4/7
I hope Ichigo and Satellizer meet again in the next chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2019
I know you don’t want to here stuff about the grammar, but dear god man it needs help. Use grammarly at least.
Beteljosh chapter 5 . 8/26/2019
Hey dude it has been a long time, good to know yo still alive. There are some things I want to share with you regarding this story, the first is that you mainly portrait Ichigo as some angry thug and that feels just awkward; also those pndoras are no joke, I mean Ichigo can seriously destroy them in his shinigami form, no doubt on that, but the thing is that you wrote a powerless Ichigo, so him beating the crap out of second and third year pandoras while not even breaking a sweat and bare handed is... well let us say it's kind of dumb. I know Ichigo is well trained and a good fighter in after the winter war, but fighting super warrior women with the ability to materialise weapons capable of destroying extra dimensional aliens, and that are also capable of high speed techniques... how I see things, Ichigo may just SURVIVE through instinct and his training with Urahara and friends. Anyhow, I know I may sound mad or something, but trust me I'm not, I do like this story so far, I like the idea of ichigo being forced to sleep so many years, but the other things could be enhanced a bit in my humble opinion. Keep the good work m8, and please if you can, write more of that bleach x tenjou tenge story it was amazing.
cam155 chapter 5 . 7/29/2019
I dig your writing. Any updates or fresh stuff is good.
HolyKnight5 chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
Sincerely i read it and it doesn't makes sense in the aspect of the plan. Considering the need of Ichigo to have support and the aging rate of Shinigami, i could easily imagine Isshin asking Yuzu and Karin for the hard choice of go into Cryogenic sleep... Besides of acting as a psychological support factor for Ichigo... The pair of Sisters would potentially become a critical asset on the form of Hybrid Pandora to be released a few years before Ichigo in order to grow enough for Pandora training and modifications...

Moreover given the fact that lineages would be treasured, and that Quincy did practice inbreeding, an older Yuzu and Karin would be a riot interested in their older brother...
classifiedgamez chapter 5 . 1/2/2019
You should allow ichigo to become op
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
As interesting a premise this is I just don't see Ichigo helping anyone after he got out of his little nap. As much as he likes helping people the whole reason he became a Soul Reaper to begin with was to save his family. His entire reason for doing this has now been taken away from him. If anything I'm surprised he hasn't gone insane. Still interesting story I'd just thinking need to be reworked some.
Eb-8 chapter 2 . 4/10/2018
why in the hell is a Chevalier Pandora equal to ulqiorra. how does that make sense?
Anon chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
Why the H had nobody, except for Tatsuki, objected Ichigo's treatment? Did no one care about his feelings. Everyone should be very protective of him.
ivan0061509 chapter 5 . 6/15/2016
Alright I just you still continue this story after the end
TheSkyKing chapter 5 . 4/28/2016
Take your time I won't rush. Cause I know that feeling. It's called life.
yiggdrasill chapter 3 . 1/17/2016
alright...the bad bit first. its not just grammar you suck at, its most of the english language to the point i can only assume its not your native language. ichigo is rather ooc in some points, hes brash and impatient not a thug with an attitude problem, you also have him swear to readily, he had two younger sisters one of which would have slapped him for sure if he spoke like that. lastly, try not to put yourself into ichigo, think about how HE would act (its very hard to actually do) he wouldnt inflict such an injury to myabi on a first meeting

now the good...you have a firm grasp on who ichigo is at his core, i really can see him waking up when sattela called so desperately for help and hes not the sort of person to serve another untill they have earned it. the whole idea of ichigo being "saved" till hes needed is an idea i havent seen used before (its normally locked up for being to dangerous) and it so fits ichigos character. the role hes going to play for limiters is very like Maria Lancelot does for the pandora. it all comes down to how hes used and deployed.

your writting needs a ton of work (so keep at it and keep READING) but the ideas and plot you have are pure gold (dear lord those fresh ideas have potential)
Kamencolin chapter 5 . 4/8/2015
Keep going
OshiroNai chapter 5 . 1/6/2015
He-he-HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?! WHYY? でも。。。That is true, Freezing and Bleach take a while to update (so does To Love Ru!) and if each takes THAT long... Better release BIG chaps, good idea no? But I'd have to re read the entire story just to refresh me memory. Meh, better late than never
Jose19 chapter 5 . 1/5/2015
I hope that you update all your stories because they are all good and quite interesting, and this one deals with Freezing one of the most interesting series of all to deal with.
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