I’ve enjoyed this, but just out of curiosity, we see 2 of the Foxes (Angelina and Katie),
but what happened to Alicia?

Also there is one point when Harry and ron are talking about the ones who died when
ron says George rather than Fred, guessing that’s just a error.

As for Jharry1960 saying that the nickname Mione is fanon only it is actually used in
canon (granted only the once by ron while he’s eating in his usual way.

Anyway, good story.
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17 chapters and just 47 reviews, it show what amounts of crap it had. But coming from you most probably you delete the real reviews because they show you how crappy your writing is. Moron

I always dislike the plot device of "in the open encourages significant other to 'cheat', while sneaking behind their back to cheat with the same person." and yes, the second is actually cheating on them, in any multi-way relationship, communication and consent are the most important things.

It just feels like a lazy writing device to an otherwise pretty decently written story.

Enjoyed your story, good read, and I liked the way you brought them all together.

Constructive criticism:

Some of your paragraphs were absolutely massive, and that made some portions hard to read. It’s a delicate balance, but it’s generally safe to split the paragraphs every time a different character speaks, or there’s even a shift in the character the sentence is describing.

Nonetheless , I enjoyed your story, and hope you keep writing.

Good Nice

A another great feel good story where the good guys come out on top. Thanks for giving it to us.

Please be Harmony please be Harmony!

Definitely worth a read and more exposure. Good work!

Hi read both ur stories ND loved them I hop u do write the other one ur planning ill b waiting

I like the story so far. Enough to stomach the fanfiction invention of "Mione". Ugh. It's sounds silly and lazy. It's not even a real nickname. Hermione is a beautiful and elegant name. I would think Harry would cherish the sound of her real name. Normally people in love use words like darlin', sweetheart, honey, etc. when they are being affectionate. Not perversions of their actual names. There are exceptions to the rule but something like Mione for Hermione would never make the cut. It sounds like the name of someone who would fail muggle studies.

10 sentences begin with 'yes" and three with "ah, yes"...LOL! Several begin with "well". I LOVE this story, just so you know. I am taking a 'word police' role here!

Half your sentences begin with "yeah". In the next chapter, they begin with "well" or "yes". It must be an area dialect where you live because I don't know anyone who speaks that way, except on occasion. Try reading the sentences and leaving out the words 'well', 'yeah', and 'yes'. You will find they sound much better. The last two words are necessary only if answering a question.

Very enjoyable. Thank you for getting all three of them together happily.

Fantastic! Loved this story and really couldn't stop once it got going. I kept wondering and I am left with no complaints. Great job and I hope to see what else you have written.

This turned out pretty well. I didn't expect it to finish so quickly but it was a no frills story and you sewed it up accordingly. I'm sure I will be giving more of your stories a chance in the future. Thanks.