Great story, you misspelled Shaak Ti, unless you did that on purpose. But otherwise, great story and it’s cool that this story is actually complete.

- CHEF
I think one way for me to increase the reviews is to just be a guest beta in a way... I find flaws which I then copy N' paste in my reviews for you to find them... I remember at one point before 2020, you said that you despise reviews that weren't meaningful to you. And by doing this, i can make my reviews have some meaning...

-CHEF
I see what you did. You use those summaries to increase the length of your chapters and make them much more longer... Tbh, I truly felt that I had remember this story having more chapters in it... Somewhere around just about 151? But, I reckon I probably remembered wrong.

On another note, I am absolutely floored by the lack of reviews this story has... It's such a great story that the amount of reviews it deserves makes it so underrated...

I typically make up a bunch of alternating names as a guest, But I claim credit(s) for Baka, Captain Keeli, Eagle Eye, Commentary, Namer, Med, and lastly, Finish Version. I also claim Reviewer as well too now. I reckon there's about several dozen of other guest reviews I probably have made before 2020... All of those guest reviews are created by one person. Me. CHEF aka Captain Hawking Empire Forge (YouTube Channel) This is typically because I happen to be too much of a laze to bother with logging to my account.

master, and the thought horrified Anakin. Varus turned away, extended a hand, and shattered a window with the Force. "Yes, my Master." Chills went down Anakin's spine at the words.

"VARUS!" Anakin managed to break free of the bonds holding him down and go after him, but Varus responded to his efforts with a full run and leapt out through the shadowy veil into the dark flaming city below.

Anakin stopped short of the window and felt himself

Doesn't that up there /\ sounds like a little bit like Assassin's Creed? I mean, jumping out of windows and leaping into the air at such a high height sounds exactly like what the Assassins do in the games...

invasion, and-

Azhoka's eyes bloomed open and she darted out of the hut. Anakin openly gaped at her sudden departure a moment befor
I forgot what chapter this was...

I can almost hear Master Anikan telling me to stop and think about it before I get angry. I can feel the slap on the back of my head as Ahsoka rebukes my antics, before she does something amazingly similar like the little annoying, lovable hypocrite she is.

Think about it… Taris was destroyed. Facts get confused in a warzone or lost in rubble. Yeah, that makes plenty of sense. No one is lieing, its just… they don't actually know and are making reasonable assumptions.

I look up at the clock and realize I need to be getting ready to leave. My daily training session with Rahm Kota and Falcon is soon. I have spent the entire night sitting around thinking and studying.

I fill the sink with cold water and plunge my head in. I let the sharp coldness seep into my skin and exhaustion goes away. My mind sharpens and all my worries and all my fears dissipate into a new day. I can worry about it all later. For now, I have a life to live, and Kota has a habit of making me do sit ups -while he sits on my back!- when I'm late.

Izthark and the Royal Guard exchanged blows. His fibroknife

fibroknife is incorrect. It is vibroknife.

Anikan is also misspelled. It is Anakin.

Medocloriens
I reckon you spelled Midi-chlorians wrong. It's Midi-chlorians... Next time m8, google it!

Azhoka is here in this chapter.
Also, it's a good thing you typically refer to her with nicknames... It reduces the amount of corrections you would have to do.

It's kinda ok to misspell Darth Nihilus... He's confusing. But Ahsoka Tano is not...

My my, you sure love torturing people...

Really curious to see how this turns out

Truly an amazing story! Cant wait to read the sequel.

The main thing here, for me at least, is I don't see how you're going to frame this to where Starkiller doesn't want revenge or the complete extermination of the Jedi order after this. The whole thing about ripping the memories from him could be seen as worse than death. I'd rather die than have that happen to me; hell I would consider myself dead the second anything like this occurred. Because who are you but thousands of experiences and choices added up during your life? What are you when those are forcibly taken away?