Reviews for The Detective
JusticeNotRevenge chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
This is so amazing! I love its original plot! Hope to see more soon!
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 4 . 8/24/2018
A guy named Thor would've been better off directing Magnus Chase but we're never gonna get those adaptations.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/9/2017
Extremely realistic. One of the best OCs out there. Great solid writing.
paintbuckets chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
These OCs are so realistic, it's a serious breath of fresh air from all those OCs out there that seem so fake and stiff. Honestly, I'm so happy that I found a book with real people in it, not just "characters".
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If you're still taking requests, it'd be fun to see some kids who are not so happy, kids like Thalia who have tough spines. Or maybe instead of Percy seeking the kids out, the kids notice that Percy might be able to help and they go to him. Idk, go nuts, this theme just seems like a lot of fun to play with.
Hollabackgurl16 chapter 4 . 3/6/2016
Silena is very cute. This story is awesome. Waiting for the next update.
Margirli13 chapter 4 . 2/24/2015
Oh my goodness, this series is absolutely fantastic! I could totally seE this being Percy and Annabeth's life!
I love it! Absolutely fantastic! Please write more soon!
Queen Sound chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
Brilliant story idea, I love the names you gave the kids.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
I really love how you named their kids Silena and Charlie after the deceased ones. It's totally something Percy would do.
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 4 . 3/8/2014
AWWWW! How 'bout I say I LOVELOVELOVE it, and you get inspired more again so I can have more to LOVELOVELOVE?!
Olo Eopia03 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
Hello again! I'm sorry for the lack of reviews I've been giving. But I've been following your story ever since that first review :) this chapter was great :) you really made the mindsets of those kids very accurate because I've seen stories where new demigods suddenly so readily accept who they are. Honestly, this is great!
Can't wait for more!
-Olo Eopia03
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
MORE! MORE! MORE! This is good and cute and funny and I'm happy Annabeth and Percy are married with children.
APlagueOnBothYourHouses chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
YES this is good I really like it! I've never read a fic like this and the idea is just really good. I like how Percy and Annabeth have a dog, that just seems like something they would do, you know? Anyways, I read on your profile that you're making a Criminal Minds spin-off, and, if and when you post it, I would REALLY appreciate it if you would PM me. Seeing as I love Criminal Minds and Percy Jackson and just crossovers in general and this 'verse already has some great potential, I think that it would be right up my metaphorical alley.
Pseu
Because I don't have a physical alley :(
FredNeverDied chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
Favorite chapter so far! Love Carrie and the relationship progression between Percy and Theo rocked! Dear Annabeth, loved her and the baby. You wrote her spot-on.

And you scared me with Percy getting hurt. But I thought that was a really great detail to the story. Of course he's still out, trying to get himself killed every other day.

Teeny question: Carrie and Theo going to end up together? ...Cause that would be adorable.
FredNeverDied chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
yay! i was looking forward to this and you didn't disappoint. loved silena. are she and charlie going to be reappearing? i wonder who got which parent's powers? or a nice blend? or full of both? really good, i enjoyed it.

and thanks for inspiring me too. i wrote my own percy-finds-a-young-demigod fic after a read the first chapter. Thanks! ;)
an obsessive fangirl chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
Oooooh! This is so amazingly fantastic that I just wanna - AUGH AUGH AUHHHHHHH. Please write more! IM BEGGING YOZUUUUUUUUUUUU
( this is when you ignore me)
heeeheee...
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