Love it and seriously wish it was longer

Loooooved iiit

How about a cross-over with the Elder Scrolls game series if so I've got a good one to recommend it's "Viing Gut Zii Yah" by ZeldinaDreamermoon. It's really good and it eases Harry into becoming very powerful and more than independent although it does go off of him using the magic from Nirn. Instead of ordinary wizarding magic, well that and he's made Dovahkiin or Dragonborn. You don't really need to have game experience or know the game if you read it. It is a Charlie Weasley and Harry Potter as a pairing

And if you have played the game than all the better. And if you have already read the fanfiction thats great I would love if you could let my know of some of the ones you've read.
it is a Charlie Weasley and Harry Potter as a pairing.

Cool Story!

Please delete this, it sickens me to have to read these words that make my eyes bleed. This isn't fiction, it isn't even fanfiction; its vomit spewed onto a page with punctuation thrown in here and there. You write with the ability of a five year old, and have the imagination and originality of a bar of soap.

Wow. I'm happy that Harry is getting the family that he always wanted. I love this story.

Love it wish it was a chapter fic

Uhm... Well, what can I say?

Interesting?

First off, it was kind of painful to read. To introduce a story, it really isn't wise to write a whole paragraph on the current physical looks of Harry, then Remus, then Snape. It's kinda boring. IT may be interesting, but when you suddenly bang it down in one LONG paragraph, it's hard to take seriously and hard to read the rest- because, honestly, it's pretty wild.

People aren't for the most part interested in the looks of Harry and his mate, they're interested in the story. Add more, give us more information. And if you WANT to explain what they look like, don't go into so much detail. You can feed the audience little bits of their clothes and looks throughout the story.

For instance, in the beginning, you could say 'his dragon hide boots helped him move silently...' and then perhaps while explaining how long he'd been gone, you could say 'the months he'd been missing had matured his face, sharpening his jaw and cheeks, hardening his emerald eyes...'

And also, you really need to make an introduction. I really didn't expect to suddenly be launched into the story. You have to give an introducation, talk about Hogwarts, talk about the weather, the current time, the mood of the people, and how Harry storms in. Please. Just give us some detail, don't JUST tell me what he's doing, tell me how he feels about it, tell me how everyone reacts, tell me WHY he feels that way!

And its' very quick! This seems like it's just a 'lets just use this story as an excuse for mpreg, my three fav characters to get together, and my most hated characters to be embarrassed'. It doesn't seem like a full on story. Everything just seems pretty convenient.

We need a beginning, which tells us the issue of the story. Then the middle, perhaps the climax, and the end is just the end, where everything is resolved and you see if things are better or worse.

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For some reason I don't see 'swift pens' but smthg else. I'll leave that to your imagination. xD. Anyway, lovely oneshot. I truly wish there was more. :)

Love it! I wish their was a story on how this all played out. Like how harry came to his inheritance, and mating with Remus, so on and so forth...Loved It!

you weresociety idea is amazing! i have all kinds of shape shifters and such in my own stories(not FF mind) but i had never thought of this! i hope you write more with it even if it is not this story, it is an idea to be explored!

I like the concept but would have liked more story.

I'm sorry but I could even get to the end of the first few paragraphs, this story is so stupid, it's unbelievable! The Court of Were? Really, and what's with giving Snape, Remus and Harry so many ridiculous titles. It's bullshit really. Also, the while over the top descriptions are silly, the one part you used 'left nothing to the imagination' is accurate as you describe so much, there is nothing to imagine!

Can u please update, I really like this story

Do plan to write more stories? Because this one is great!