Awesome... but just so you know, condoning means permitting the practice. Condemning means forbidding it.

You'd think that after the days of struggling to get to the lake, that Arthur would notice Merlin drooping before merlin collapsed. Arthur's a prat but he's wasn't that bad after Merlin broke him in.

Aww. So sad. Beautifully written death and Aithusa's tribute.

Splendid.
The last bit was a little under-dramatic, felt like it was missing something, but otherswise, all of it was fabulous!

I was laughing throughout this entire chapter. I likely shouldn't have, but it happened nevertheless.

That was quite enjoyable.

I look forward to his crash.

I cried a lot reading this chapter...

nooooooooooooooo
not
The End
those are evil words

Arthur! Why did you have to bring up hid death! You have been a very naughty boy!

bad Merlin!

So very good. We need more like this to give us hope not more fear and death!

I loved it! Thanks for writing!

Can't believe it took me so long to read the update! I really enjoyed the story, though I wish it hadn't ended there. It just feels a bit unfinished to me. But overall you did a GREAT job!

Jess

Cute!