Reviews for The Illegal Affair
Nad chapter 6 . 8/14/2016
I wish there would be more chapters, seriously. This is a great story
jazzyfizzler chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
aha i love this story

hilarious.

its been years!

UPDATE!
cat chapter 2 . 4/12/2006
words cant exprase how good your story is

I love it!

I really do its go for your first fic.

yah! I think this is your first fic. anyway you did a really good story the summary is good and the story was good please write a ch.7
Guest chapter 6 . 3/12/2006
Unrealistic. You should definitely consider polishing up your writing before you post; for example half of the dialogues between Pan and Trunks don't have periods at the end. And what kind of teacher has sex with his student in the classroom? This fic could have been alot better, if you at least showed that they didn't get each other for a long time but Pan got him way too fast.
Lincan Iyekiaro Taliban chapter 6 . 10/3/2005
great story i really like this one please add more chaptors
R3mz1mlu chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
r u gonna continue this.. it sbeen like 3 years?
Pammy chapter 6 . 8/3/2005
Dammit..I always end up reading old stories when I get bored. You haven't updated in 3 years. GEEZ..where are you? I know people fall out of the writing thing on like i did..but i still read stuff and try to. hahah. Well I realy like your story a lot. Hahaha. I don't think this will do much, but oh well. P
tpan chapter 6 . 8/12/2004
I absolutly love your fic Illegal Affair.

When I first saw this fic around 2years ago when itwas posted. I read the summary and it was completly different to me. I never read it until a couple of months ago, I regret not reading it sooner.

I just LOVE the way its in more then just one

person's POV, it gives it variety. When I read the

first chapter I was so overwhelmed by how powerful of a writer you are. I couldnt put myself to read the second chapter for a couple of weeks because it, it hurt my heart. Just thinking what would happened to Trunks and Pan. It may sound crazy but I get attached to fictional characters. I have been a T/P for years..so that maybe why I felt like crying after I read the first chapter.

I noticed you havent updated in almost 2years and

thats probably a tall tale sign you never will update and you have lost your interest in writing this fic. Or it could be a completely different reason all together.

If possible, if only hoped. If you ever decided to

update "Illegal Affair" or write any other fanfiction could you please e-mail me. I would greatly appreciate it.
MiraiXenia18 chapter 6 . 6/15/2004
Damn thing won't let me log in...anywho. I love your story! Yeah you must hear this a lot. I like how you've written it. Through the testimonials of the witnesses, very clever.

I've just started writing T/Ps since I decided, due to a reviewer’s request, to write one myself and I was in serious need of inspiration.

This story is excellent and the attitude you give Trunks is exactly how I picture one of the Trunks in my story, well, sort of like it, not exactly per say.

Anyway, I see you haven't updated for quite a while and I sincerely hope that you update soon. I would love to read more of this.

It sounds as though Trunks truly loves her or is lusting after her with no end. Lol, I can’t decide on which one. All that sexual talk has me confused now.

Please update, but don’t rush. Pressure can be brutal at times and entice writer’s block. Happy writings!
XxScorpio-MoonxX chapter 6 . 6/15/2004
Hey! I love this fic. Please update soon, prwetty, prwetty please?
Day Dreamer006 chapter 6 . 4/28/2004
I LOVE YOUR STORY! UPDATE PLEASE! I can't wait to see what else is going to happen. Please if you can update this story. Till next time bye.
aquaprincess1 chapter 6 . 10/4/2003
Go girl.. Update! its too good of a story to stop..
Guest chapter 6 . 8/22/2003
[pouts] you haven't updated in a while. This is a really really good story! Are you gonna leave us hangin like that? [softly sobs] No! Update! UPDATE! WAH...please?
TisforTwee chapter 6 . 8/18/2003
OH MY GOD CONTINUE! GO GO GO!

:_: i must know what happends!
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