I'm just gonna say it. EVERYBODY ( especially Sonette) sighs WAY TOO MUCH. Seriously, its like every 5 seconds. However, the story is pretty good. So, aside from all the sighing, great job. :)(:

I find it strange that your writing skills never improved since chapter 1.

Hello, just wanted to say, good job. This story is amzing and long, both of which I like. I have read all the chapters so far, just to lazy to go to the last chapter after reading the eight reviews. Anyway, keep going, don't stop and I am here to encourage you to write. Have a nice computer trolling day, night and weeks.

Huh. The Phantom group is just like my group, Storm Aegis. Except smaller. Maybe a stand-off in a One-shot will make it stand out?

Just asking. Thanks for the story

ok I'm sorry but I've seen this in a number of your stories and it's bugging me. The word “uses” is the plural form of the word “use” not the word “you” so please for the love of whatever god or gods you may or may not pray to stop using it as a pronoun.

I know hand to hand combat works in action movies but let's be honest can u really take down 100 men with machine guns with your fist? Gun would do better!

Guns! Fighting! Time crisis style!

Does everyone get guns? I hope so.

awesome work as always. I can't wait for more

Cactus hugger and poison tester are just a few jobs nobody takes.

The summary is odd, but it fits the story. Like the prominence of dull non-Sonic characters and dodgy punctuation. I wonder whether the author is allergic to periods, commas or both.

Technical issues like random tense switching in dialogue tags aside, the disappointing parts progress with the number of characters introduced. The narrative falls apart under the weight of novelty: there's too much stuff alien to Sonic. It's thrown out there at a rapid pace, making it difficult to develop or concentrate on.

Because it seems like the reader is supposed to visualise the room plan and forget about the characters involved. Think about the details that can be disposed of, so a reader can pay attention to things that matter in the story.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.