Would have liked to have seen some more of this wish you had to continue that

I love this. Please continue. I have never heard of humanity making contact with the Beth first. Well in Detroit become human it was the androids but anyway, this is really interesting. Keep up the good work!

Of course you would have Shepard as a spartan along with the four companions, your a goddamn cliche pleb

Haven’t played any halo games but I find it odd that the heavy frigates are longer then the destroyer. Sure you didn’t get the sizes reversed?

Is this story dead? :(

This is so good, just wish it would continue.

Excellent idea putting TIM in a high position in the UNSC. If anyone had a cause to hate aliens, it was anyone who lived in the Halo Universe, and TIM would fit right in with the crowd.

Interesting spin you have on this crossover and reasonably well written too. Also yey for nihlus not getting killed. I hope that an update is coming in the future.

Pretty good story, but I just wanted to pick out a continuity error, it was the Humans who invented Medi-Gel in ME so UNSC can't actually procure it.

Nice work on this.

Keep at it.

I really, really hope that this story hasn't died, and might come back someday!

The Shadow Broker is an information merchant - someone who sells data in exchange for money. It seems very strange that with hundreds of billions of credits worth of raw materials at hand, the UNSC's first resort when dealing with the Broker is mass murder.

Assuming the UNSC has any resemblance to our UN, then under UNSC law the operation on Hagalaz would be a criminal act - the UNSC is not at war with the Council, nor is it at war with the Broker. As such, sending troops to kill dozens or hundreds of people would legally be murder, not a legitimate act of war.

It's also a considerably more difficult method of information gathering than simply PAYING the Broker. Such payments could be made anonymously through the geth very easily.

If you're trying to portray the UNSC as the good guys here, you just failed completely. If you're trying to portray them as morally superior to pirate scum, you failed at that too. If you're trying to make them look like a bunch of honorless thugs, you've succeeded.

The rachni war wasn't 2600yrs ago it was 360 in ME canon the asari discovered the citadel 2000 before the story begins and the salarians a few hundred years aftr that

Please continue this story! It's awesome!

quite good