LOL Fang! I am laughing so hard at the ending of this one.

Wow! That was such a beautiful surprise. I love love love it. :D

I would like to see a one shot prequel to this, as to how Serah died and how it started Lightning's descent into depression (and the events of this tale). Otherwise, it's a well written tale.

Light is one smooth motherfucker at the end XD

i read a similar story but with Yang and Weiss. I enjoyed reading this!

Very cute. And once again, incredibly believable with these characters. Neither would be the first to back down and they would, indeed, soon find themselves engaged. Out of sheer pride, if nothing else.
Very fun. Very enjoyable.

This is some seriously dark shit. I actually fuckin' cried, damn you! I hate it when people write this shit. I ESPECIALLY hate it when it's so fucking well written that it makes me choke up and bawl.
You should be...
...very proud of yourself. It was incredibly well written and what's more, I find it completely believable with these characters (Of course, being the Final Fantasy world, death is just a status effect and would probably require Lightning and Fang to slaughter their way out of hell or some shit with Serah in tow. Probably battling Caius Ballad or something...).

Fun little oneshot. Gave me a smile!

Nice.

ha it was short and sweet

Yay for updates!

Cute! Though you should have put that thing about the bonus part at the bottom so that there was more surprise :D

OMGG this is gold... Hahahaha I'm already picturing it already... Hahaha my god ... I wish it was longer... Haha I would probably be like fang clueless and that end though... Hahaha you better put up a shrine for Serah fang

That hit me right in the feels. Like a shot to the heart.

Welcome back to authoring ;)

Definitely my favourite piece so far, I liked the little details you placed in it like the the mention of Lightning's gunblade hitting the back of her legs as she walked, just shows the attention to visualisation.