This was perfect.
Especially the last line. :-)

so adorable!

Loved this!

that was beautiful. and I loved it. especially the end when he knew she lived him before she knew she loved himhow cute!

:-D

Gorgeous, loving sketch. Thank you!

That's how I feel about Jack, he knows his heart, and he knows the woman he loves heart as well.

Every now and then I come back and re read this beautiful, poetic piece you've made here. So simple and economic with the language, it's just wonderful. I've long admired your work, since 'No Such Thing...' and really enjoy all of your Phryne/Jack pieces as they each have different versions of their relationship and dynamic. Getting lost in then is a guilty pleasure of mine!

You get them, don't you? And it shows. Lovely.

Every now and then I have to come back to red this, as it's so tender and perfect for them. Sigh.

So sweet, so perfect... thank you! :o)

Eugh, I still get goosebumpy when I read this... How I wish we'd see this vignette filmed!

lovely recap of some high points in their bantery, heated, interactions

Lovely. The two voices are spot on.

This is beautiful and so sweet! I hope you'll write more about Jack & Phryne. I really loved all your stories and your writing! Thank you.