OHH I like!

Yipee! Field trip! Yeah, can't wait to see how it turns out.

Thank you for this. Really need the first-season feel of things about them. You know, with all the coming episodes getting more complex and oddly sombre (to me, at least) as each of them tries to root out their own conflicts: Red with the hit, Liz with Tom, and the mole, whatnot.

This is like living back in the better days.

There are some of the lines in here that are super good , I'd quote them. So full of characters, it's like they're spouting it naturally. And your description, amazing. Great flow and beautiful. I kinda get envious of it, seeing my own writing.

Anyway, it's a great one!

I like your parallel to doctor who, if that is indeed what it is. The last line paired with the chapter title prompt me to believe that it is a reference?
Interesting start to this fic. I look forward to reading more

Bring it on! Please don't feel obliged to adhere to plot or storylines of the show. That's why I read fic, to escape canon. This is wonderfully written and I can't more!

This is fantastic; nothing but love for the mood of this.

Red, I love your skills of manipulation and charisma. Just, ahhhhh perfect Curious, what does 'akhoya' mean? Meera doesn't not appreciate lateness, Liz. And oh my goodness, epic playground. And heck YEAH, Meera weaves up the playground like a boss. Things get slightly more mysterious. Planned for a long time? Oh snaaaap. Oh my fudging lord. Don't try and lie to criminals Liz, they'll compare it to baked goods and compliment on how pretty you are. Consider yourself: pwned. I can't wait for the next chapter! :3

Great chspter :)

Love it

I WAS SO SO HAPPY WHEN YOU UPDATED!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH:) stupid question but are you still doing platonic?
Cannot wait for more xxx

I wonder how they knew they would be in that house? Interesting. Thanks for the update.

Lies are his bread and butter. Loved that. I don't think he's lied to Liz on the show though at least not that we know so far.

Well done.

I am having so much fun getting caught back up with this story and reading your new additions. I hope time and real life let you continue to update quickly.

Awesome plz continue

Haha, that was easy. I hope there's more. Thanks.

I totally knew Red was playing her. He always has a role for Lizzie.

This chapter tickled me. :)