I love me some Rayne, but every now and then a Jaylee fix is nice. Adorbs!

Nice ficlet!

I love protective!mal. This is a great first story for the archive

AAWWWWWWW that was cute. im a Rayne love but i liked that story mucho mucho

but they would be hot together

I like it. Seems like it should be part of a larger story. But it is a good "moment"

Oh, poor Kaylee. I honestly feel for her. If I had Jayne hinting he watched me change I'd turn into a stuttering pile myself. Cute fic. You have everyone down realy well. Gotta love Mal's big brother act. Very realistic. And so like Jayne to follow Kaylee like that. Again, great fic!

I just thought I'd read this because I love Kaylee. I love nerdy chicks. Everyone seemed to be in character. And Malcolm is always protecting his crew.

Lol, really enjoyable. Funny and sweet, very true to character : ) I love Mal's line about procreation And now I think I'm gonna check out your slash work : )

Shiny. I think that's exactly how Mal would've reacted. Someone's gotta keep that Jayne away from poor innocents like Kaylee!

Ooh, I like it! You've got the characters down really well. Woulda loved to have seen this ;)

-sil

Hmm, you gonna continue?

:)

Interesting beginning! hint! Beginning.. write more please! nice for 10 minutes, espeically.

Yay, More please.

Also, It's not bad for only writing slash, I normally only read slash anyway, but I really like this pairing for some reason and there's not much of it out there. So be original and keep up the good work. .~

Nice story. I like the characterization and I can't resist Jayne and Kaylee interaction (with Mal thrown in for good measure.) Shiny!

The Cap'n's so adorable when he's bein' protective. :-D Very true to character, all of the characters, in fact. Very nice story!