So I think I've read this story about 5 times since it was published and I gotta say you pretty much nailed the personality and mannerisms of the crew of the Normandy in this

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After all these years I had no idea this was complete.

This the best chapter! I can imagine the elcor doing the dialogue

I wish that this happened in the game SO BADLY

can't wait for more!

Never liked that bitch. GreT conclusion

Dayum liara! Sick burn. As soon as i read it i was like: ooooooooooooo bitch got SERVED!

Javik fucking rekt her! Damn, my sides! They're entering low orbit around Ilium! XD

Oh, please please please do FShep/Javik. That would be hilarious

I'm shepherd and this is my favorite position in the galaxy
Had to find a new lung

I don't know...I imagine Quarians hackers might be able to take something off of the Extranet if they really wanted to.

So, what about all those Hanar/Asari pairings?

I never understood, in game, why nobody knows what the Quarians look like. Surely there's some Quarian porn left on their internet (Sorry, extranet) left from before the Morning War.

I loved the part from Legion's perspective, but I think you may have had the transition into individuality be too... emotional. Entry 06 just felt uncomfortable to read.