| Reviews for Rapunzel's Guest |
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Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 7/3 Yikes. Typical gothel reaction,And Snow White overheard it. both suffer from Wicked mother figures. |
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 7/3 She just didn't look dangerous at all. A frightened child was more what she looked like. Of course, Rapunzel had never seen another child at all, so she wasn't entirely sure. She knew there were other people out there, but she had never encountered another one. Animals were gathering around the girl, looking at her and sniffing her. Rapunzel wanted to be there. And Mother was gone for the next couple of days. She'd never disobeyed her mother. But how could the girl be dangerous? And she looked like she needed help too. It took Rapunzel several moments of back and forth, before a giddy need to help took over. If she saw any pointy-toothed men, she would just run back to the tower and climb back up. With this decision, Rapunzel looped her hair around the hook, and descended from the tower. It was the first time she'd felt grass under her feet, and it felt cool and sort of moist. She was a bit overwhelmed by the feeling, by the fact that she was out of her tower, and for a moment she just clenched and unclenched her toes in the grass. Then, still leaving her hair hooked up, she tiptoed towards the girl. —- I love it. Crossover ideas like this. I also interested in the usual Snow White, meeting characters like from legend of Zelda. Who try to protect her when the queen tries to kill Snow White three times. First with a corset to crush her ribs, and then drugging her with a poisoned comb. The third, we all know. But this is mighty interesting too. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2015 It's a great idea to combine the two fairy tails! The outcome is super sweet:3 I really like that there is no man uptill now,but who know(actually only you) he/they may show up soon. I'm really excited about their (mis)adventures in the woodsXD |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/1/2014 I love this please write more! |
Disney Freak chapter 3 . 1/7/2014 I hope the dwarfs make an apperance. |
TrudiRose chapter 2 . 12/23/2013 I'm so glad you continued this! I really like this chapter. Snow White and Rapunzel are both so naive and innocent, but in different ways, so it's adorable to see them interacting. Mother Gothel totally in character too! |
TrudiRose chapter 1 . 11/16/2013 I like it! They're both very in character. I especially like the way you captured their individual ways of speaking: Snow White a bit formal ("I'm afraid I've no home. I'm sorry to intrude") and Rapunzel more casual and modern ("Well, yeah, but it's okay"). |
BrokenWings2602 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013 Ooooohhh, I'm hooked already! Please update soon! Can't wait! |