I know it seems little odd to be writing a review midway into the story but hey, I'd really just like to say that this is one of the most unique and entertaining fics I've ever read. And I admire your DETERMINATION! I hope you have a lot of fun writing this because it definitely shows!

Oooooh. I was hoping that Xazier would just give Matthias one good one to the face. Just ONE good one. I mean who in the hell has a reason to be crazy-douchey like that? He makes even PAUL of all people seem like an okay guy!

You know what, I realized that I never commented on the first chapter of this story! Old OR revised! Neither the second all the way to the 5th I guess. And with all of the stuff going on for you to get to make us happy, I can say that these revisions are nothing short of fantastic! I love how everything is SUPER changed around, both situation and personality-wise for these characters and it's somehow even MORE entertaining to read. I wish you luck in the future of this as you go all the way with it...at least you SHOULD go all the way with it now.

Wow! I was soooo surprised to see a new update though it's just a note! But I'm happy you're continuing the story it's really funny and I what! So many times throughout the whole story. I've been waiting for this story 2 to maybe 1 years already I'm have I didn't give up on it!

A new version, huh? Well it's most definitely the better alternative then completely stopping. Good luck on you and I'm sure to read the revision!

Amazing and Mindblowing.I suggest U to write more and surely 1 day u'll become a Pokemon Script Director.

Write! Write! Update! Update! Please update!

Please update! I FRICKING love this story its so goddamn funny!

please update this amazing story not only is it original in every way but it has one of the best plot lines that ive ever heard so please update this story ill wait for you to do it forever loyal fan guest

GOD DAMN! RETARDS FUCKING WITH POKEMON AGAIN!? SURE, WHY THE HELL NOT!? Kuja (SEE! I KNOW THE NAME, MR. POINT'S OUT TYPOS) got them EPIC skills though! I mean he just HAS to become the strongest Greninja ever! I mean...it'll be blasphemy if he didn't! That's one cool partner.

I know the guy hehe. He stole my story too. And I don't mind telling his wattpad name. I'll do it so you don't have to!

Lucariomaster41

This guy has plagiarized my stories, Deceitful and A Boys Wish. Someone told me, and boy was I happy to know.

Aaaaaaah! It's Siiiiiilver! And Meganium, the final form of my favorite pokemon of all time :D !

All I have to say to this is... L.O.L. Seriously, this brightened up my day, or night (since I'm writing this at near midnight) and really brought some fun to this boring one-month holiday of mine! Hope you won't be that busy now and have time to write the next chapter!
And now comes the dreaded question:
Will Xavier get any other 'moves' other than Draco Meteor? Just curious, since Pokemon can have up to four moves, and I've already begun suspecting Xavier's true origins... (Half-Pokemon, anyone?)

Your version is... Darker than most pokemon stories

Silver...is STILL an ass!? Really!? Meganium doesn't need to take this? Xavier can take care of her with no problem at all. Kujo wouldn't mind.