Reviews for The Journey For Light
Guest chapter 12 . 12/28/2017
love this story. it is the best barbie fanfiction I have read so far. it perfectly potrays the characters and the barbie theme. especially how accurate the facts are and how the villian changes from bad to good in the end.
Mary H chapter 12 . 7/31/2017
I think the story was great overall but you should've found a way to incorporate Rayla and Raina earlier since the both wanted to marry Prince Carlos earlier.
sakura chapter 2 . 6/24/2017
Story maker!
Elina is daughter of enchantress. Elina look kinda like the enchantress or Elina had a rainbow in her eye. Enchantress's theme power is rainbows. Enchantress made Elina wingless because she knew that laverna would return. I hope this happen in fairytopia magical twist in time.

I know! maybe someone make fanficton story
"Fairytopia Magical Twist in Time"
Brittni chapter 12 . 4/19/2017
Mariposa is lost princess!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/15/2017
... Holy crap that was unexpected...
Guest chapter 10 . 1/15/2017
Finally!
HE DID IT FINALLY!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/15/2017
WHY?! LSDJVNGDF
LOOK AT THE PETAL YOU SMART IDIOTS
Guest chapter 7 . 1/15/2017
Plot twist? No? Okay...
Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2017
I can't believe Mariposa did that... she's being stupid for the first time in her life
Stormfury02 chapter 4 . 8/18/2016
love!
Brittni chapter 12 . 7/15/2016
BEST STORY EVER!
LavernaG chapter 12 . 11/9/2015
It was a good story. I enjoyed reading it. But I just don't like when things change too much, and here they did. But still it was nice.
MysticMiraculer chapter 12 . 11/6/2015
Omg hahahaha they all dated the King omg I laughed so hard! When I saw the movie I kind of hoped King Rigellious and Marabella would somehow end up together but yeah. Yay Carlos & Marisposa! My biggest OTP ever!
MysticMiraculer chapter 8 . 11/6/2015
I love that you brought in Nori & Naluand Elena & Linden into this story (which includes Mariposa & Carlos)! They're like three of all my favorite Barbie movies ships!
Decembra1998 chapter 12 . 9/25/2015
*wailling* so beautiful, just wonderful, marvelous. Finally thank you for having Carlos and Mariposa finally get married. That's as a perfect ending to a new beginning. As Queen Mariposa a d King Carlos rule Flitterfield with noises stuck in a book. *laughs *. Willis and Talayla are two peas in a pod. Ranya and Rayla were there and Elina and the Enchantress too. It was tear wrenching and beautiful. Great story. Keep it up.
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