Reviews for Broken
CrystalAris chapter 1 . 6/23
...you know the best part, a good amount of those ‘soldiers’ are ‘fathers’, truly a blessing they are. “Can any body hear her, can any body see? Or is everybody...”

Also did those bastards steal her work or give her credit, they damn well have!

Damn it, read this 4 times and still balling my eyes out!
CrystalAris chapter 1 . 6/23
Wow, I’m crying damn this is heart wrenching. No pun intended seriously. Thank you for showing the other side of pranks, it’s not always ‘just a prank’ honestly... just...

This is Reality. It’s not nice it’s not pretty, in some way we are all broken, we all need that one person to ‘stop’ it. And not just ‘help’ and repeat, but STOP it. Stop the source.

Those commercials to donate and help are nice, but they don’t STOP the problem, they just delay the inevitable.

This story is what can, no what HAS happened, just in transformers universe instead, letti g us see characters so maybe, just MAYBE we will pay attention, no matter how small, stand up. Just stand up and Stop it. Be that person, not the crowd. Be the one to stand. Not the one to push, not the one to look.

Don’t say you care, show it! PROVE IT!

“The first step to solving a problem, is realizing that its there in the first place.”

Dont push the button because someone tells you, say no.

I know I’m ranting, but this shit is real and damn this story proves it, if this could be a mini movie or something maybe people would listen.

Maybe people could, Would start care.

“Sticks and stones may break my bones,
But words will forever Haunt Me.”
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2018
This was beautifully written.
IShipMaskyXHoodie chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
This is a good story, so much so that I am drawn back to it without meaning to be. I know what it is like to be bullied so much you withdraw into yourself. It happened to me for almost three years and it was only my family keeping me from going over the edge. I even considered suicide. The bullying has stopped but it still broke me, I lost my way slightly and forgot who I was. Either way this is a good story and good example of what could be the results of bullying
God is Gracious chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
Fuck, this is depressing
Ro2a1yn chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
Everytime...every single time I read this beautiful piece of art...I always tear up cause it's so wonderfully written and I love to read this when I feel depressed despite the fact it might make it worser...but it makes me feel better. This truly is the most wonderful I read
GoodCastleTreasurer chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Amazing little story x Well done x
Til' all are one chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
THIS WAS AWESOME! Depressing but AWESOME! :)
CaptainBlue56 chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
I cry every time I read this!
Setet17 chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
It's so sad but I love it.
angel897 chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
a thrilling story to read brought tears to me eyes
SunstreakersSquishy2.0 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Sad:(
Dream'sRealm chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
I wasn't really a fan truthfully of how the twins were portrayed. True, they are trouble makers but I never pegged them as being outright cruel. Still, this was a beautiful one-shot. I've been in Uri's position and know how it can feel... forgotten and mocked so much so that you retreat within yourself to feel safe. I am glad however that she had such a wonderful guardian. Two, in fact.

Excellent work, darling, overall.

May God bless you and your day, my dear friend!

Until next time, Dream'sRealm
Luna Uchiha666 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
This was a sad one shot; one I know tells a story of many other people in this world, in this life time, and the last life time. It is a sad fact that the majority of the planet, can no longer hear the deafening sounds of someone's soul screaming and crying out for help. All in all, I really liked this one and not a lot show how mean and cold hearted we humans have really become and how closed off we are to really see another pains and be there for them. Hope to read more awesome stuff from you.
Shimmering Dawnstar chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Oh god I cried when I read this!
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