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I hope you'll finish this one day ): it's very good and the idea is awesome.

You don't even know how loudly I screamed when I reached the end. sob. please write more this story is so. so. good. i love it to pieces.

I just finished reading all ten chapters. You really have me hooked on this story. I can't put my finger on as to why, but I adore the ending sentence for chapter ten.
The whole concept of this story has me itching for more. I sincerely hope you end up posting more of this very soon. I want to read more of this NOW! But, I suppose I'll have to wait. Keep up the great work!

Please continue with the story! I love the plot and i really would love to see what happens with Roxas and Axel. Not to mention what would happen when Axel has to meet with Ventus again!

Ten chapters in one sitting lots to process... I like the idea of Axel making a game out of 'falling in love' and I'm excited to see how the game ends between him and Roxas! And then the whole thing with Ven - why didn't he listen to Vanitas? Terra x Ven make such a cute couple and you're building it up so well! The Riku and Sora tidbit was heartfelt and humorous; seeing both of them provoking Axel until he was jealous was great

KAIRI IS AXEL'S SISTER?! That surprised me!
I look forward to reading your next chapter :D

I love this story so much. its probably one of the most creative I've come across. the only issue is the pacing of new chapters. I read the first nine chapters of this story last September. to throw out some math, that's the time it takes to film a major motion picture. and who knows when the release before that was. its my only turn off to the story. I just can't stay interested in a story with bi-yearly updates.

Knew it was Kairi. So if Axel even says the word love is that bad? Or did he just not want to say it?

Does Reno know about the game or does he just think Axel has luck with both men and ladies lol.

That ending...wow, why did Axel pause?

really i didnt see that coming, this gave me so many questions, i cant wait to read more. And ROxas meeting Axel's family is so good but what will happen!

I...I don't know how to feel right now. Like, my feels are all OVER the place, and I have so many questions, and I need to read more!

This was absolutely a turn of events, a quick paced chapter, with plenty of turns and chills, to keep you reading, a absolutely amazing chapter, that has defiantly made me want more. Please, please finish this, I think i'll go insane trying to figure out what happened next.

I get the feeling Axel actually fell in love with Ven and didn't want to lose so he did something...?

yay Roxas is jealous, This is getting good

Yeeees, this chapter was SO good. I love me a jealous Roxy too, lol XD
Can't wait for more

This is such an interesting story! I can't wait to find out what happened between Ven and Axel!