Reviews for Once Upon A Time |
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knZIi chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Veri n1c3p4ost0riXZ |
Mitsuko chapter 1 . 11/17/2016 This is nice 3 |
urbi das chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 u for dis fanfic. i'm a great fan of tamako market and they r so was d first fanfic i read of tamako market. i really feel that their with me. so thank u very much for the fan fic |
KikyTheCatLover chapter 1 . 12/19/2015 Can you continue please?its was so wonderful! |
m.Autumn chapter 1 . 10/27/2015 LOOOOOVED ITTTTTTT Thank you _ |
taiyin1998 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 This was the cutest thing ever! REALLY GOOD JOB! Keep up the great work! |
madi chapter 1 . 5/3/2014 Kawaii! write more:3 |
KilllaKirika chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 OMG OMG This is so good! I love this story as much as I love Tamako Market! |
karu chapter 1 . 12/7/2013 i liked it! please continue! |
Saltedcaramel chapter 1 . 11/27/2013 This was great for my current Tamako Market obsessed self! Oh dear, the affection that Mochizou has for that girl is just outright adorable. Overall, I loved it! However, a little constructive criticism. I noticed a few small typos to fix up and quite a few run on sentences. I'm also guilty of having too many commas (did I even spell that right?) in my sentences, and I'm often told to split the one gigantic sentence into two. Just reading your writing out loud can really help :)! Keep writing! It was lovely! |
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013 Very , very sweet. Well done |