| Reviews for Give Me Your Hand |
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karizmason1234 chapter 14 . 5/1/2016 Can you please make another book or update it because it is such a interesting book and I need to know what happens next |
karizmasimon1234 chapter 14 . 4/5/2016 I love the book maybe you could continue it maybe I like it and I am very excited to find out what happens and sorry for being a late reader |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/27/2015 I loveeee your stories! It is hard to find good, long quality stories now a days... Anyway, you have proven to the ppl who has considered cutting or suicide as the answer, that others are there for you! Keep up the good work! -Faith Hamato, theHamatoKonichi, Lightninggal24 orr Shadow Dark Star |
dandy-akinoris chapter 14 . 8/4/2015 Me: HEEEEEYYYYY! I REALLLYY LOVE this story and its prequel, so PLEASE continue! It would mean the world to me! You're an AWESOME author, and since I read this story on an IPod, I couldn't review. Sorry:( Holly: Look, I like Leo and everything, but that b*tchface NEEDS TO LEARN THAT THE WORLD DOESN'T EVOLVE AROUND HIM AND GROW UP! WHAT THE F*** IS F****** WRONG WITH HIM! MI- Me: CALM DOWN THIS INSTANT HOLLYBERRY! Holly: SHUT DA F*** UP! Me: * loud cussing in background * Sorry if you thought that was flaming, Holly was in one of her 'rant moods- Holly: WAS NOT Me: YA! Anyways, Holly nearly smashed the computer when she read- Holly: DA F****** RETARD'S 'STORY'! YEA, WE FELT SORRY AND EVERYTHING, BUT HE'S SO SELFISH AND WALLOWS IN SELF-PITY WAAAAY TO MUCH! MIKEY-POO, DONNIE-DA-BRAIN, AND RAPHIE-BOY ALL HAVE PROBLEMS! HE'S A LITTLE- Me: CALM DOWN OR YOU'RE BANNED FROM MINECRAFT! Holly: Hmmmf fine Me: Sorry again, Holly's gonna go to an anger management therapist to help- Holly: WAIT WHAT! Me: SHUT UP! Any ANYWAYS * glares at Holly * Please continue and may God bless you too, I'm also a Christian! :) |
Screamingcrows1 chapter 1 . 6/13/2015 I know what these characters are going through for a lot of it and I cant help but love this story. I hope you update it soon because tje story has many true aspects. For ideas, what If Donnie fell back into the depression he felt in 2nd grade when he thought about suicide? That or maybe Donnie's parents end up dead in a drunk driving incident so he is now an orphan? Sorry Don is my favorite so I love torturing him...hehehe...well I hope you update soon and god bless you. Bye for now |
PitchnightBadger chapter 14 . 5/13/2015 sorry I couldn't reply for long, some stuff came up Take as much time as you need hear me? Because I want you to be comfortable, safe, and healthy before you jump back into your work, I hope your feeling better! You're beautiful no matter what. btw, is your email gmail outlook hotmail or what? Cuz I wanna talk to u via email |
AussieTurtle chapter 13 . 11/3/2014 SO happy to see an update. I love this story and can't wait to find out how it ends. I also love how it has a real-life-problem in it and is raising awareness for a real cause that most people are forced to face daily. I wish I could've helped you get over your writers block last chapter but I've had it [writers block] lately, too. I love Mikey blowing up during this chapter and how you gave both Mikey and Donnie their own opinions on this matter. Some authors forget that all the guys and characters are not remakes of each other and will all approach a situation differently from each other. Ps. when you do the Author Notes, I would appreciate it if you put A/N: and then have the authors note in bold so that I stop getting confused like "Wait, what? Where's the sto- Oh, wait, I see now. That's just the author note." That's just me, though, and it doesn't really affect this amazing story. :P :) PPS. Sorry if this review didn't make very much sense. I am so tired but HAD to read this update the minute I knew it was up. Thanks for the update :) |
tmntlover2013 chapter 13 . 10/28/2014 Great job on the chapter please update soon thanks. |
Smile or else chapter 14 . 10/26/2014 Hey guys! I welcome any comments, contradictions, and questions you have on this! I want to clarify any questions or conflicts! :) God bless! Love you all! I'll have a chapter soon for you! |
I Love Kittens too chapter 14 . 10/25/2014 Amen, Kiki. You're mature and brave beyond your years, little one. When you grow you will be a wonderful young lady. Psalm 23 is the most beautiful psalm on the Bible. |
I Love Kittens too chapter 13 . 10/25/2014 This so sad. Raph drank again, but cannot blaming him, he is frustrated for not able to help Leo. |
I Love Kittens too chapter 11 . 10/25/2014 Leo's behavior had make Raph to drink again. Now both of them re in the hospital. I hope they are recover. With this, I think Leo had reach the bottom of a dark pit. |
I Love Kittens too chapter 10 . 10/25/2014 Leo doesn't know, but is for his own good. I think he needs to touch the bottom of an abyss and then realized he was wrong. He needs to go to a mental hospital because he is really sick. Doctors will help him to get out of his nightmares. |
I Love Kittens too chapter 9 . 10/25/2014 Don't worry, Kiki. |
I Love Kittens too chapter 8 . 10/25/2014 Poor Leo! His friends noticed his wounds and then after Raph found him, he cried for help. That's a good sign to recovery. |