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great story! Absolutely great!

Lovely little one shot :) I really enjoyed it!

lol. awesomeness.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

That was so good! I loved it! So IC from ten as well, it was like I could hear him reading it in my head. So good! And basically yes that was it. That the Doctor is just insanely in love and lust with Rose and you made it ao completely and wonderfully believable and in character for both of them, from Rose's confidence to her insecurity amd the Doctor's completely being out of his depth with the whole conversation. It reminded me quite hard of Eleven and his reaction to Rory and Amy, and the whole fic mixed Nine's 'of course I dance' and ten's 'I just snogged madame de pompadour!' kind of exuberence. All these are kind of sides of the Doctor's attitude to love and sex and everything, and I love how you captured it so brilliantly. Well done. So much love for this fic.
And oh yes! There was one timy criticism I had, which I forgot in all my praise - that weeellll, thing, which ten does do quite a lot, but you did it a LOT a lot, and about half way through the fic it started to jarr it was coming up so often. Might wanna cull that a little bit.
Still. Awesome fic. Loved it. Well done :)

This was super cute! Usually in a story I would get super annoyed with all the yelled, inner dialogue but this story is so well-written that you made it work well here and it didn't really bother me, which I can assure you is hard to do! Great Job!

SO CUTE! 3 you ought to end it with a smut scene :3 yknow... not lonely anymore, yeah?

Oh my God its was so freaking adorable. Well Done! :)

This was so lovely! I was starting to hyperventilate there for a bit, thinking that that the silly things (love them both, but really!) would miscommunicate even more and it would all end in tears and sorrow ... but it didn't! Yay!

Very cute, light and fluffy. Heavy on the interrupted words, and the Doctor is very much on the defensive, but I suppose Rose can do that to him and I can believe it. You write well and know the characters quite fully, which makes the difference and easy to love. Thanks for this cute little piece!

interesting. i liked the dialogue.

Wahoo! You posted it! Something from you two nights in a row. Yay yay yay! And I loved it. The Doctor is so wonderful when he's can't seem to be all Time Lordy the way he thinks he should be. Or when he in thinking about Rose but not knowing she feels the same way. ALL THE TIME, ROSE indeed. This was great!