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UPdate? I am loving this story

I know this says it was discontinued, but I'm hoping that someday you might want to continue writing. Not sure why you stopped. However, if it was personal or your like me and have a super bad case of writer's block i just want to say that this is a really good start to what could be a great story and I hope you continue some day.

I know this is a long shot here...but you should update and finish the story! It is fantastic! I love it! Really hoping to see Jim when he wakes up...

More more more! Please add more chapters soon! I vote Pike alive and knowing about Tarsus IV. Jim's kids could also act a little antagonistic towards him too for a bit of added emotional play too. Might help to getting Bones and Spock questioning the history and relationship between Jim, his eight kids, and Pike. Maybe bring in rest of command crew for more fun. Please update soon! Really really want to know what happens next! :)

i'm incredibly intrigued and look forward to reading more.

This was AMAZING. PLLLEEEAAASEEE MMOORRREEE

There's no more chapters... why are there no more chapters? It's so good! :)

Tears in my eyes...

update?

Ah! You updated! I've read this before, but I didn't follow it then because it had been more than a year, but I was going through all the Tarsus IV fics and I found this one again and oh my goodness you updated and it is fabulous and now I'm rambling! XD Anyway, this is great! I can't wait for the next part! Please update soon!

Well at least they had good reactions

I enjoyed Kevin and Tom's reactions to the communications they received. Anxiously awaiting their arrival (along with other Tarsus IV survivors?) at Jim's side. Also looking forward to crews reaction to finding out who they are and how they became part of Jim's life.

Quick note - I appreciate that you include the date each chapter is updated.

Liked. Very much.