| Reviews for Serpent's Eye |
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fifi chapter 7 . 5/16 Hi ! I loved your story ! a good orochimaru has no plan for his daughter ! certainly there is no love for his daughter but I have the impression that he cares about it anyway ! by the lack of precision of its appearance I imagine taipan to be a pretty little porcelain doll dressed in a kimono top and a legins down with two katana, yeah I have a weakness for the pretty character in looks weak but totally badass, a rose with thorns we say! it wasn't really smart on the part of tai to have killed gato and that's it, she could at least pretend to improve the lives of the villagers to have a kind of loyalty from them because of having villagers avenger will bite him if they talk to powerful people ! the favor that orochimaru to ask, I would have thought that it would be infiltrated like taking part in the examination of chunin with like teammate karin and haku can be or with kimimaro and juugo but not to kill the kazekage ! but I still hope that kazekage would be a rather difficult child's play ! you can tell me exactly who this tenzo was, i thought it was yamato but i don't know anymore ! I really hope that you are still in the sector because it would be a shame that there is no follow-up, so see you soon and good luck ! bye ! |
Spidersauce chapter 3 . 12/21/2019 Uh, if she spent her entire life in Orochi's base with fucked up "family," she wouldn't scream at a bloodied body like that. Aversion to killing is an acquired, taught thing not a natural instinct, so Orochi, the genius he is, would know something was up if she screamed in terror like that. |
Spidersauce chapter 1 . 12/21/2019 I always thought Orochi did have his share of trysts. I just thought none of them were with females :o |
Anonymous chapter 7 . 8/14/2019 This is a wonderful, ensnaring story. It has me enraptured. I hope you find it in you find it in you to update. |
silver.wolf.1155 chapter 7 . 5/16/2019 ha |
GilZeAwesomePrussia chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 I WOULD WANNA BE HIASHI’S KID SO I CAN KICK HIS ARSE FOR HOW HE TREATS MY NEE-SAMA/IMOTOU! |
VioletCitizen chapter 7 . 11/2/2018 I'm guessing you're not working on this anymore, but if you ever do, i'd love to see more of it. I love characters that actually kind of depart from the norm, and I was close to wanting to write an Orochimaru-child OC myself if i couldn't find one. This one is just perfect; Oro seems in character enough that I don't see him as made more evil than he is, nor turned into a anti-hero. Tai herself is fun enough that I'm curious where she'll go and what she'll end up doing. |
sakura000 chapter 7 . 9/3/2018 Continue plzz. N i think about the invasion. Orochimaru should not join. I mean his objective has been achieved right? Instead make the edo tensei hokage trashed the konoha. |
SirensSingg chapter 7 . 8/21/2018 I hate everything. why do i always enjoy the fics that are abandoned? sigh. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/16/2018 I still come back and read this from time to tine hopeing for a update still enjoy reading it though |
darklight66 chapter 7 . 1/11/2018 i know this story is likely abandoned bit will follow it anyway it has a very interesting premise i do hope u come back to it one day |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/7/2018 Very interesting premise I know the story is lickely abandons bit I do hope one day I come back to it |
Kloness chapter 7 . 11/18/2017 Perhaps, sasuke would remember the rude girl that saved him from drowning that itachi made him apologize to and after Orochimaru beats team 7, kakashi and naruto and Sakura and sasuke would be brought to the cottage and be prisoners, and Orochimaru would take sasuke after sasuke gets attached to taipan and after a time skip of kakashi chakraless by Orochimaru’s design so he is still trapped, sasuke comes back and during this time period the rest of team 7 comes to term with their situation and accepts it but have managed to let taipan ease up on the citizens of wave. And the invasion is fast forwarded so konoha has no time to send backup for kakashi. |
ruinedsandwich chapter 4 . 10/10/2017 was that a harry potter quote I see. thank you |
crackdmoon chapter 7 . 9/16/2017 Orochimaru is hella creepy, but I can also - sort of? - see fluff potential. It makes me kinda uncomfortable (and like a creep) for some reason but I like it when Taipan and Orochimaru are pushed into interacting. |