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J chapter 13 . 7/30 Good. Update. |
BadKidOh chapter 13 . 7/19 Good new chapter. Interesting that you changed it so that Snape & others knew Peter was a Death-Eater. Also nice changes with thew attack at Quidditch world cup, It kinda seems in cannon it may of been Lucius that set it up with others for as a publicity stunt & for fun without orders form Voldemort or knowledge that Voldemort was still around for sure. I guess the Dark Mark over the camp ground was Bartemius Crouch Jr acting on his own without informing the other Death-Eaters, as the other Death-Eaters disapparited for whatever reason when they saw the mark in the sky. Maybe out of fear or maybe because killing was not part of the plan and they thought some overzealous idiot killed someone and then cast the Dark Mark in the sky. Also it be amusing later if Voldemort & Snape got along better then Snap & Dumbledore do so far. Although I guess Snape will be hiding that he hates Voldemort for killing Lily. Also I guess if Snape had to he could tell Voldemort after 6th year that Harry is a horcrux, so Voldemort would stop targeting Harry & may even want to protect him, but that might get Snape killed because he knows to much about Voldemort's horcruxes or maybe richly rewarded for warning him, unless Snape tricks Voldemort into thinking that he is unaware of the other horcruxes and just tells him that Dumbledore believed that Harry had a shard of Voldemort's soul form that night in 1981 for whatever reason. Also I guess Voldemort finding out Snape is Harry's father would possibly make Voldemort even more unsure about the prophecy. Although I guess a lot could change before 6th year. I also still wonder if Snape will get his hands on the Ring & talk with Lily among other things. Also I would guess Voldemort is still going to die in this story some how unless their some kind of deal & uneasy peace. |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/19 Complimenti, quando Severus potrà riavere suo figlio? Hermione si metterà con Severus? |
Lucyole chapter 13 . 7/19 That was on monster of a chapter but an amazing one love it. Hermione knows now but won't say anything. Ron is still an idiot and Dumbledore gets on my nerves with each chapter I hate him more and wants to punch him and send him to the farthest planet there is for how he treats Severus maniptaing old bastard he is. I'm excited for 4th year and what you will change there. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 12 . 6/5 I'm loving this story so much,pls pls update, can't wait to read next chapter |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 11 . 6/1 I just finished this chapter and now I realise there is only one chapter left, I know this story has many more to come, many things to unfold, pls update chapter 13,pls, it's a wonderful story, I'm loving it so much |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 5 . 5/19 What a chapter, mind-blowing,full of emotions, I cried a lot when Severus was at Lily's grave... I think Severus should have taken Jenna's offer, after all he has some needs,there is no need to suppress those needs and he should not have disappointed Jenna. |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 4 . 5/19 Seriously,fuck off Dumbledore,infact I want to call u Dumbledick I have tears in my eyes for Severus, for his helplessness,his pain |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 3 . 5/19 I'm glued to this story, loving it so much |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 2 . 5/19 Amazing story, loving it so much, I'm still crying, Severus' pain brings tears in my eyes... Fuck off Dumbledore,fuck off your manipulative ways |
HermioneSnape394 chapter 1 . 5/18 This first chapter was awesome, story seems interesting |
Jess chapter 1 . 4/10 Wow, you really like long, rambling sentences don’t you they seem to go on and on short and to the point isn’t your style but that’s okay as it’s not my style either as I’m the run-on-sentence queen! All hail queen Jess! |
BadKidOh chapter 12 . 4/6 Good new chapter. I guess Snape join sooner in this story rather then after Hogwarts. I wonder if that would have been a good opportunity or not to call Minerva out on her hypocrisy given that she was seemly unaware of the marauders group bullying in the past or looked the other way or sided with them or maybe she was just as harsh on them. |
Lucyole chapter 12 . 4/7 Great chapter very interesting. Really everytime you mention Albus and Ron's behavior I want to punch or hex them, that Rowling made Hermione and Ron à couple in the end is beyond me really they have nothing in common and he always made her cry and Albus is such an manipulative bastard in all what's worth never taking Severus's seriously when he tries to warn him about something and then trying to keep him from the Malfoy's who truly care for him I like them or like to see them in such a carefree and happy manner before the darkness is coming at them again. More please that would be *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Guest chapter 12 . 4/5 Complimenti, anche se odio Silente per quello che sta facendo a Severus. Spero che Hermione sappia presto la verità. |