Reviews for Denser
Ushindeshi chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Who knew Natsu had these amazing thoughts about Lucy. Great story.
Nora chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
you need to mention about Lucy words "its more fun when we're together" in tenrou also please describe natsu's feeling about Dan Straight confession towards Lucy :D if you could include the movie part where natsu & gray saw her naked as well natsu being protective (always near her) and the final scene after hugs (credit ending scene) 3
Aia Dragfilia chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Too much feels! I agree! Lucy is the denser one! That was so sweet that I was smiling and blushing till the end! Aaaaaaaaaaaw! It's really amazing of you to draw out Natsu's 'might be' feelings from the start to the recently finished arc! I have a request- pls make a fic like this, only, it'll be Lucy. please? Great fic, I already smashed the imaginary 'love the fic so much' button. work again!
lgohi13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
That was so good! Natsu sort of hqd a point during his time with Lucy, ha, ha! It's so cute! :3
Cindy M 19 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
It could be easier if Natsu didn't have a innocent face with a dense personality.
Natsu-and-Lucy-forever15 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
wow i love this story! you should make a squeal through lucy's point of view!
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karu-senpai chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
aaawww KAWAII!
I'mLongGone chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Awe! How sweet! Keep up the good work!
Yukkikai chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
good one!
otakugirl321 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Haha this is good! It's nicer if you make a sequel
R3iga1004 chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
wow its is an eye candy to me !
way to go ! i love it and its funny LOL
so this is from Natsu Pov ! i hope that you will give a sequel for this on Lucy Pov who's denser!
in my opinion both of them knew but didnt want to get together because the main bad guy is yet to come out !
its made it much more sweeter as the fluffy and the fan service too
ArtGirlLullaby chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I want a chapter where Lucy goes to his house and read this, then, they got married lol

I love it! Cute and still inside of the charather )

*hugs*
-Lyoko
fire king chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Really good story :D
But...i felt a few uncomfurtable zaps in para 4 & 7 coz
4. Natsu was initially anoid wen she came with him to save macao coz she wanted some popularity plus was bitchin abt d cold wch she didnt knew abt.
7. Natsu every1 in d gild knew dat she was a heartfilia, just dey didnt know that she was a runaway richie.
Thats all, i just
Lady Potter chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Oh! Oh! Oh! This was just too cute and the last line! afdsfjdsklfj feeeeeeellllssssssss. This was so great! Thanks for posting!