OMG! I COULD NOT STOP READING! I AM SO F***ING LOVING THIS! :D

epilogue sequel plzzzzz

WHY WHY

I was so excited about this story. The idea was great the character were awesome, and the plot was pretty good as well. The writing for the first few chapters was amazing and i really enjoyed it. This chapter started out awesome as usual and up until he found her it was superb, but to be honest, i think the ending to the chapter was really bad… there was so much room for other things, and you chose FIRST time sex (at least for Emma as far as i could see) in the bushes… It kind of seemed like you got bored and tired and just ended it as quickly as you could. There was so much room for other chapters in the story and i get that you don't want to spend a year writing a fanficiotn, but such an awesome idea most defiantly did not deserve and ending like that (i i saw about an epilogue) When neal introduces himself, he say bae- neal the whole relationship between killian and neal could have been explored. In my opinion they should have gone back to the castle before he started kissing her boobs, some of the dialogue would have needed to be change for that to happen but I'm sure you could have done it, and he could have explained thing there or something. Then if you wanted, he could have slept with her but not have sex and just be there as comfort because she was so upset. it might have even been if he just carried her home then slept with her and explained it in the morning… i actually think i like that better :) and then neal could have came back or something and Killian would have protected Emma and there could have been angst. What I'm trying to say is this story had so much potential after the phenomenal writing of the first chapters and you just kind of killed it… but i understand that its your story, but it just kind of disappointed me…:( never the less i LOVED the majority of the story, that was just my opinion :)

I can't wait to see what happens next. This story is written really well

yahoo!

This fic is going to have a place in my heart. Love it. Can't wait for the epiloge

I understand Emma's need to run. It's what she knows. But it's frustrating she never gives him the chance to speak. I am glad he followed her. I think the scene in the forest is beyond amazing. I'd like for there to be more M rated chapters in this story due to how well this one was written.

WOW! This definitely deserves the M rating! I loved this chapter! I can't believe this is going to end...I'm going to miss it so much! Thanks for this amazing and beautiful story,never stop writing because you're brilliant! I'm really looking forward to that epilogue! PLEASE,SOON!

Loved it great job

Finished the story please

This story is fantastic! I loved loved loved it! Probably the best CS no-curse scenario that stays true the the original story that I've read! It was really great! Can't wait to read the epilogue :)

So amazing ! The smut was so good and i just loved everything about this chapter

I'm so pumped this was so good! I'm always game for a little anger-love-rough sex. It's so hot! Beautifully written.

Definitely enjoyed it. This was great. I can't wait for the epilogue to come.