Amazing story, superbly written. It should have millions of reviews. Liked the darker Sherlock very much. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write it.

Ok im done u didn't come here to read john over taking some doctors john this is bullshit!

Nurses abd doctors would of beeb in there as soon as sherlocks alarms started going off. Hate hiw you always tey make hospitals nurses and doctors be slow or bad at their job just si JOHN can play doctor and be the hero.

His an army doctor good for him doesn't mean his any better then any of WELL trained doctor or nurse or surgeon so stop making it seem tyat way like everyone else does if his so fucking amazing sherlock wouldn't need to be in hospital.

Thanks for a wonderful action-packed tale. Excellently done.!

Magnificent from beginning to end. I added it to my favorite stories list. Truly original and incredibly exciting. Hope someday you take up writing again because you are enormously talented.

Don't know if you'll see this but I wanted to leave a comment about what an incredible, amazing story this is. Absolutely riveting.

Loved this story! The psychological issues, the friendship, Mary, Mycroft... everything.

Just wonderful. This story is a masterpiece of plot and character. Are you using this gift now? I hope so!

Truly fantastic read (and very prescient, given it was written before S3). Would love to read more of your work.

Why is this magnificent story sitting at a mere hundred and ten reviews? Well, at least I can add one more to the count.

This is, beyond a doubt, the *best* Sherlock story I have ever read. I'm wishing that I could bold, italicize, underline, and capitalize that word between the stars to show how serious I am. I'm quite shocked that English isn't your first language, because you have a better mastery of it than 95 percent of the naturally speaking population. There were a handful of small errors, of course, missing apostrophes, semicolon vs. comma issues, and a spelling error or two, but those are forgivable. They're few and far between, and don't distract from the reader's experience in the slightest.

This story has made me fall in love with the Sherlock fandom well and properly. Your characterization is spot on, and I just feel so, so bad for poor Sherlock. You've put him through some awful times; you know that, right? Waterboarding… Dear God, I feel so sorry for him, truly. And poor guy, his mind palace! His inner sanctum, corrupted by those awful electrical shocks. I have to admit it makes for some nice fluffy moments between him and John, though. Those two are just so perfectly suited for one another in the friendship sense, but slash… no. That's the best way to ruin a good story like this one.

Sherlock's digital diary was a touch of genius on your part, dear author. I think that every one of the readers was leaning forward on their seats, waiting for John to read the next entry. The scene that got me the most was when Sherlock was under the bridge, wounded, and when he started crying, my heart just melted, there's no other way to say it. I felt exactly as John must have, thinking what on earth Sherlock has been through. Gosh…

I can only hope that you'll come back to this fandom one day, and until then, I'll be waiting and reading this again and again.

Eryniel Alassë

I have just finished reading Firestorm for the second time ( though I have read parts of it three or four times). I am still amazed at your skill. And I hope, with all my heart, that you would write another story. or several. Please consider it...please!

W-O-W. Incredible story - truly one of the best I've ever read! Believable plot, perfect characterization, and just beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing and I really hope you write more stories sometime soon. Great job! : )

Wow. I've really loved this story! Your writing is amazing and I had no idea English wasn't even your first language until you mentioned it! I'm so glad about the way you portrayed Mary, it was nice to see how she works with both Sherlock and John. I hope you will continue to write! :)

This is an awesome work of fanfiction. Absolutely loved your handling of Sherlock's personality and dialogue. Thank you for an enjoyable read!

I am a university teacher and I have to teach a class in 15 minutes ... and I'm sitting in the staff room with tears running down my cheeks ... WOW!