update plz

Dang it. What a cliffhanger to stop on. Grrr, if only there were more chapters.

I'm on the edge of my seat damn it! This is too interesting.

Please please please please PLEASE continue this!

I had to do a double take and realised that the chapter titles were all coming from somewhere! I did a search and screeched "POETRY". Your chapter titles are from the "Hope is the Thing with Feathers" poem! Geezus, wow! I love that poem! I can't believe I didn't see that until now!

Gosh, I hope she doesn't die! Too soon! Way too soon to end! Noooo! Please be ok, you need to see your Creator!

I'm glad to see you haven't given up on this story, it looks like its coming to an interesting answer. Keep up the good work.

SAVE HER! What has Tali been doing poking at her processor?! Her spark is gone snuff out!

This is a great story I wonder what everyone will think when they find out she is a child keep up the good work

I got teary eyed when she said she didn't want to be alone. So Legion was trying to sort out her messed up processor. I'll wait to hear what Ratchet has to say.

What makes me question is that the metals are known. Its cybertronian mesh, they should have no idea.

Just started reading this and gotta say I am really hooked looking forward to seeing more so keep up the good work

Weird but intriguing keep it up

I would love to see this story updated. Your story has the potential to be something great.

Well that was confusing. Poor Vitam...

Another great chapter can't wait for the next

This is really starting to irritate me. I can't take seeing her suffer like that. When is she gonna get the help she desperately requires?