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Leos go round was exactly what I was hoping for. Holding the relationship in high value. While also being able to deny it outright makes him the badass and my favorite turtle

I’m one of those OTP-shipper types for a given fandom, with little to no deviation. So, being curious enough to discover how one could convincingly create a dynamic like this, normally rife with complications, and that was more than a lust-driven PWP, I decided to give it a chance.
You wrote it quite well, being sensitive to the individual peculiarities and nuances of each interaction. Admittedly, I did have to skip over Mikey’s runーI simply can’t be comfortable with that, especially with his latest incarnation (in the 2014 and 2016 Michael Bay films) at the forefront of my mind.

And, while I still favor only one-to-one relationships, at least I can understand how an author might fathom this scenario with some depth of feeling. Realistically, I’d hang up my coat on it working out so smoothly, but this is FF, so have at it. That aside, the Leonardo moments were the most intriguing and developed (naturally, given his unique position as a sound leader who strives for the neutral zone), especially with your efforts to unravel his complexity a bit to make him and her believable. Bravo~

Wow. Thank you. This is exactly the kind of story I was looking for and you wrote it so amazingly well! I think you nailed (haha pun intended) each of their personalities and how that translated into their love making! Well done :) You are a very talented writer, you write with a lat of maturity, humor and wonderful dialogue. Also, I love how you resolved your Leo dilema, it was perfect! Whatever you're doing in life now, I hope you are still writing something, anything! Because You are a writer! PeeCe & LuV

This was pretty darn cool! I'm serious! Awesome work... reminds me of some movie I watched, forgot the name, but has a girl loving two guys... One rough, the other soft... and lived in the same house.

Loved it a lot!

Love it want more

I honestly couldnt stop laughing for most of this story. So awkward and hilarious! And then I couldnt help but coo at the absolute adorableness of Leos love. And a new tot is on the way! Thanks for writing something so lovely.

I love this. So skillfully written. Much better tha. regar smut.

oh wow this is as far out as you could get with these...loved how you incorporated the personality in each so each was different. Think Leo might have been my favourite example lol

Uhhh... umm... really I'm only 11 but I'm into this stuff I've always wanted to see what would happen if I did do this with the turtles (mainly my little Donnie)! 3

2 me, it rocks!

This story was absolutely fantastic. But also I agree with Sweeterthansugar that there should be a sequel to show how they raise the kid, but you know this still rocked! TMNT Forever!.

totally awesome omg nosebleed so much i think i need a transfusion