:( this chapter seemed a bust. Too much side character focus

I wasn't sure what to expect when I started this, I never got past Pokemon platinum (I think) but I absolutely love it!

Please update this its really good.

This story has a very nice plot. You had done very hard work to design the plot of the story. please do not leave abounded to this.

plz continue this story?

I think it's been said before, but your story is intriguing, though as others have commented, the SM part is fairly overdone.

The entire story of Hermione being Jade's mistress was because she had a crush on her when Jade saved her from the troll in first year, yet throughout your entire story, she's been more keen on "collecting" more people for her harem than anything else. If anything, Daphne has been the one she's been focusing on more and more which just doesn't make sense at all. There's no element of emotion between the two of them despite it being one of your primary plot points.

Furthermore, in the earlier chapters Hermione mentioned no one would ever touch her harem, yet we see Kouji sharing in Jade now, she's pretty much turned from someone who trusts in the word of people to someone who lies to get what she wants, then continues on without any preamble.

It's fine if she's done crushing on Jade, but right now the characters are very two-dimensional, in that Jade is pretty much just training in Blade Magic and being a Slave who is untouched by Hermione after their first time. Hermione is learning her way, but has pretty much no business in leading the entire group around.

Perhaps it's different in the Pokegirl universe, but there should be an element of trust and boundaries between the group, I've seen nothing from the characters, especially Hermione to allow her to have Pokegirls coming toward her so easily, let alone having a near full group.

What about Sirius and Remus helping with training? There should be elements of them since they'd gone through the entire year of schooling, Jade has no trouble learning straight from a scroll? It might be because you're trying to move the story line along quickly and you're trying to introduce a lot of characters, but as a result the development of the characters suffers.

For the moment, all I see is Jade becoming discontent with her tamer, after all, if all she wanted was another Pokegirl dominating and taming her, she could get that from any single person.

nice chapter please update more

Not a bad story, though the sm thing is a bit over the top though. I can understand a couple ofvpeople in the story, but it does seem a bit over done though. Its not a bad story over all and very different. Haveing harry potter as a poke girl is different and having the nerd as her tamer is funny. Lina inverse is funny haveing shown up though as mr blacksoke girl. Not sure how the insect twins tei into the storyline though.

... Seriously ? Mind rape, then Rape, then Mind rape, again !?
What. The. Fuck.

nice chapter, I'm surprised Ranko was a trainer, I thought she'd be a pokegirl, anyways, keep up the good work, update soon

I hope that one day, Hermione wakes up to find at least one more poke girl in her harem, the reaction would be funny.

I'm uhh.. curious.. how was Lily not like how Jade is?

It's as amusing as it is annoying to find to find that, probably the first pokegirl crossover where the trainer isn't a pokegirl rights' activist turns out to be with a female lead, of a side character that I dislike, that uses the genderbent main character as the slave.

nice chapter, keep up the good work, update soon

nice chapter, but I want to give you a heads up, the link in the chapter does not seem to work.