Bro, I found this after it was finished.
Let's just say that I really loved it, and it is your fault that I am up past 12:30 pm.
I read it all today.

what the hell was that about

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Well, at least this is not full of ugly Davis-ness. Is that how u say it? whateves!

Tai is probably sooooooooooooooo pissed rite now! HAHAHAHAHA!

Love love love, goddamn I love it like dammit I f&#$ing love it!

OHMYGAWD THE ENDING IS SO KAWAII XD

REALLY SWEET!

i really liked it

in my opinion the whole story is a has a very good idea and is very original but i think you may have gota little sidetracked with this whole dark ocean thing wheras most takari fanfics focuson normal lifenot the digi world or any of the others. And whats with calling him 'Takeru' all of a sudden?

wow! i love this story,it has the perfect mix of action and as constructive critisism, i would have had t.k. getting really pissed at big ugly(the digimon not davis):p thus making patamon warp digivolve. also i would have shown the rest of the gang if people are giving u death threats about a certain characture in a fanfic nonetheless then they need to get a life. wow i typed all that on a cell phone :D

hey hey

so good so far ive got to read a load of anime writing for coursework (dont ask) thought this was a real good looking story ] coolie beanies! x*x*x*x

That was great if you think of another story you should write it, so I can read it!

good story so far but 1 thing black war greymon seeled the digiworld gate in odipa (sorry for spelling dd home town) not the dark ocean

I don't like sounding critical when I review fics, but there are just a few things that are wrong and that are seriously bugging me. I son't know if you are aware, (or if it is just changed for this fic) but Blackwargreymon sealed the Hightonview Terrace gateway to the Digital World, not the World of Darkness (Dark Ocean/Forest/etc.)