| Reviews for At Dawn We Burn |
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ACExMAVIS chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 awesome |
Facing Fear chapter 1 . 10/8/2017 That was great, *fiery*. I'll show myself out. |
cameron chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 :D nice |
QueenTheTitan chapter 1 . 6/3/2016 Intense. That's all I can say. Very Intense. |
Dorminchu chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 "The feel of her is breath-taking, amazing, divine. He loves the way she ignites him with fire and how he can drive her so fucking wild. And he loves her, the way her eyes meet at the horizon between the sea and the sky, the way her hair shines more beautifully than the gold on the King's crown, the way her smile makes his chest cave and his stomach coil, the way her touch leaves sparks across his skin. He wants to tell her how he feels, because she should know. "Annie," he utters bashfully, provoked by the clenching around his shaft as she hits her climax again. "I love you."" This line in particular just kills me. Wonderful characterization. :) |
Princess mAlice chapter 1 . 11/17/2014 Very out of character... How fid they hook up? |
Arrowx86 chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 Wellllllll, pixis was under the table the hole time |
Ruairi J.L chapter 1 . 6/10/2014 "We'll watch this city burn to its roots and fuck on its smoldering ashes." That's one of the best lines I've ever read on this site. Great wee story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Now that was just a-dor-a-ble. ;) And the writing was fresh, to boot. Kudos. |
DownsofFire chapter 1 . 10/25/2013 I must say, you seem to have a fetish for italics. I kid. But seriously, I'd tone down on the italics. Emphasizing words in sentences while I read gave me a chuckle. Otherwise, this was really good. It makes me curious to wonder if Annie and Eren had this relationship, how would other events turn out? Great job overall. Just tone down the italics. |
Jet Nebula chapter 1 . 10/21/2013 WOW. This story was fantastically well written, I didn't know what to expect but I was far from disappointed. This one will get reread again and again, that's for sure. You have real talent. |
Aristo chapter 1 . 10/20/2013 Sweet and hot |
JoeyofBlades chapter 1 . 10/13/2013 Love it! |
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013 mmmm nice |
matsuky1407 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013 Omg my ereani feels that was just so hot and passionate. The descriptions are just so beautiful i just caaant. The emotions the dialogue the act itself kyaa So well-written. Thanks for this wonderful breathtaking piece. you dont know how much i needed this aftr ch 50 came out. My erenxannie shipper's heart is crying so painfully at the moment. T.T |