| Reviews for Flesh and Steel |
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LilMissPinkChink chapter 5 . 6/17 Love the premise! |
Oogies4u chapter 5 . 6/12 Oh wow... Now this is a good alt story. Hope you will finish this one:-) |
Lordlexx chapter 3 . 2/21 The last tournament was held in 1792... you could at least try and keep some canon stuff. |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/19/2019 great story! only a couple things: prehaps you should add a bit of consideration for growth? harry will outgrow his new limbs, and hermione should have mentioned that also. Also, with the machine-gun arms, wouldn't you need some crazy license for that? i'm american, but imagine how hard it would be to get a license for like concealed-carry machine guns in the UK. |
RedRyder01 chapter 5 . 11/3/2019 This is actually the first story I ever read that you wrote and I really enjoy rereading it and some day hope to see more of it but for now thanks for writing it. |
sylvelle chapter 5 . 10/31/2019 Excellent. Wish there was more. |
jake the dragon chapter 5 . 7/17/2019 I like this so far keep it up |
chyaraskiss chapter 5 . 7/13/2019 I would be interested in seeing how this story develops. |
Latarra chapter 5 . 7/7/2019 Highly interesting. |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2019 Plz continue this story. |
Tiffany Smithi chapter 3 . 1/10/2019 But Harry can't use magic. He spent his whole magical core, he shouldn't be able to use any magic unless the recovery process was jumpstarted somehow. I mean, i assume the recovery of one's core depends on magic - after he casts a spell, his core regenerate the used magic because of the other magic he didn't use up. But if he used it all up, he shouldn't have any magic left. Since the punishment (at least in most fics) for leaving the Tournament is losing magic, he also shouldn't have any reason to continue, since the punishment wouldn't do anything. But I suppose if part of the treatments was jumpstarting his core, or if the ambient magic of Hogwarts or the spells used on him did that, I stopped that would work. |
tracey.platt chapter 5 . 11/30/2018 Read this a while ago and loved it. Just stumbled across it again and reread it. Still an awsome story. Any chance you will pick it back up in the near future? |
Rebmul chapter 5 . 10/26/2018 This is really good shame its dead hopefully someone will take it up and finish it someday. |
deathwearsblack chapter 5 . 8/23/2018 please upldate. |
Smokeing chapter 5 . 3/13/2018 Very good story hope you can pick it up and finish it |