Omg i hope she doesn’t go back with jim. I totally hate fics that do that. Like the unrequited love from a bff or an ex then they find someone super cool but r like ‘i still love him’ and go back. *crosses fingers* stay w mccoy.

You had me almost crying at the last chapter. I swear I was about to a writer's and readers panic attack. Don't do that to me. I love it. Please write more soon. Btw do you know about the usage of apostrophes to make it possessive rather than plural?

So I'm confused, does Joanna exist in this story?

I really liked this story. I really wanted Addy with Bones, and Chapter 10 just broke my heart. I liked chapter 11 much better. ;) Great job.

I think was good while it lasted at least. I do have to admit that I'm not a fan of the last chapter being a Supporter of Bones throughout the story, but I'm just happy that you continued with it.

Sorry for not reviewing the last couple of chapters. I recently got a second job, in an attempt to finance my university education. Fun right?

Whuh...? So basically everything after Ch. 1 was all a dream in Adelaide's head, while she was unconscious after the destruction of the Farragut? Quite the roller coaster. I knew something was off after Adelaide brushed off Kirk at the bar and I think that the two of them would have reasonably talked like adults. I mean the two of them are childhood friends and know each other's behavioral tendencies, so yeah.

Aw, poor Addy and Bones :( Things are looking a little rough. On the bright side you have avoided unnecessary corniness (spelling?)! Yay!

Leonard's reaction of being protective (and extreme hovering) was very much in character, and very believable.

I wonder how Bones is going to propose, considering how much drama just occurred...

Life got in the way so I've just read all the new chapters, this morning.

Omgness the baby! I'm not sure if they should lose it either. If they lose it, the trams might ruin them as a couple. Or at the very least Jim might see it as fate saying that should have been his kid. The part of me that is cheering for Bones and Addy really wants the baby to live! And then is it does live, Bones will be super protective, to the point where it will bug the heck out of Addy. Or maybe have the baby live, but say that it might be difficult for her to have children ever again... The choices are too much! Luckily, it nit my decision;)

I really enjoyed the new chapters!

Wow this is such an amazing story. I love it! Took me by surprise about Addy and Leonard but it was a good surprise. Keep up the great work I look forward to reading more.

I have never received a shout out before, thank-you! Between school and work I'm extremely tired so this won't be a long review, but I think it's proper to at least tell an author that I've read their story ( and liked it).

I really enjoyed the chapter; it was a perfect way to end my day. I really liked how Adelaide was the one to suggest Jim becoming first officer. It was a nice touch.

Now off to bed before I fall asleep at my keyboard...again.

Another chapter in such a short amount of time! You're spoiling me.

I have to say that Bones is really good for Adelaide and I hope Jim eventually sees that. I will admit I cheered Bones on when he was chiding Jim about his treatment of women. I also had a bit of a girly moment when Leonard confessed his love. You turned me into a sappy girl for a few moments, so congrats on that :)

I am eagerly awaiting Jim's reaction! Once Jim sees them together, it will make losing Adelaide seem real him? ( does that make sense?)

I'm also curious to see how Adelaide will react to Jim losing the Enterprise. Will she pity Jim or has he done too much damage? Can Jim take losing his ship and "his" woman? I'm just teasing myself with these questions, I'll stop now :) Great job

OMGNESS! That was awesome! I enjoyed it a lot and I'm really glad that you posted another chapter.
When Kirk finds out that "The Boyfriend" is Bones, well, I don't know what will happen! But I would like to find out.

You have come up with some great character dynamics and for that reason this is turning into one of my favourite Star Trek fanfics I have ever read. Great stuff, thank-you so much for posting more.

Btw, I think may be cheering for Bones; Kirk deserves a little kick in the pants. Hopefully he'll learn from this.

I know you said it was a one shot, but do you think you could continue this? You don't have to give a happy ending (for Jim anyway), but I would love to read more.

I enjoyed the story is this going to be a multi chapter story or is just a one shot? Either way good job.