I love this story I can't wait to read the sequel

Why did it end with Rose being gone

I love when the Tardis is nice to Rose and against the doc XD

AHHHHHH GO AWAY RIVER

Loved this!

I knew rose was gonna come back solely because there was like 17 more chapters.

omg i thought it was the metacrisis doctor proposing and i got really excited because when jackie was like Mr Smith i forgot that was mickey's last name and i thought she was joking around with the doctor's fake name john smith and then it was saying like, mickey said and i was like what the bloody hell is mickey doing here and so i reread that part like 5 times and then remembered mickey's last name. Goddamnit don't get my hopes up like that!

Something odd has happened to your formatting on this chapter, it's pretty unreadable.

Whoa! Huge formatting problems with this chapter. Lots of code mixed in. You need to fix it. As is, it's unreadable, so I'm stopping here, but I was interested up to this point.

Yo, author. This chapter is majorly Eff'ed up. every other line is 'p-style' this or 'font-family' that. Kinda messes with the reading. Err, could you please fix that?

Hello! Sorry, but I think that the format screwed up a bit? But, what I could decipher, this was a pretty great chapter. Anyways! Keep up the good work, but you might want to take a glance at this one. 'Til next time!
;D

The formatting is REALLY messed up in this chapter
I don't know what's Wrong but it's BAD

Turn off the source code.

Damn. I think chapter 4 needs to be re-uploaded. Something hinky with the formatting here.

I'm really sorry, but you have to know the difference between your and you're.